Reviews for The Betrayal
eggers chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
UPDATE please
Cascade00 chapter 7 . 1/15/2014
So happy that you've updated! But kinda sad that their wasn't at lot of Ken and Kairi moments but at least the story progressed!
dark nightmere chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
I think that Kari should begin to become more evil as she undermines Ken's operations in the digiworld to take it for herself. I think that Tai should return to the Digiworld to save his sister unknowen to him she is almost gone competely because of the darkness. I think that Kari should gain Gotsomons trust and use him to sabatage Ken's base from the inside while she takes down his sevalinece network and begins to install her own to capture more digimon. I think that Daemon should watch Kari carefully prepareing to make his move because when Ken falls it will leave a big oppetinity to conquer the digital world one that he cannot pass up to some fools such as Akinemon and Mummeymon who are week in his eyes. I think that Kairi should begin to built her own network up from strack as she aims to bring down the digimon empror and conquer the digiworld. I think that Ladydivimon should apporach Kari nearing the end of Ken's rule and offer her the chance to claim great power if she joins forces with her which Kairi will accept. I think that Myostismon should act from the shadows readying himself to strike as soon as the digidestioned defences are down and Ken falls to his forces. I think that Deamon should explain there plan to Kari to conquer the digiworld by using the dark spore that came from the dark ocean they can conquer the digiworld and unleash chaos. I think that Kairi should concider this knowing that she can claim great power maybe the whole digiworld in the plam of her hand but she should ask if she will just be a puppet to his will which he will denie. I think that Daemon should make up a bigger plan to give Kari to his master Myotismon as soon as her task is complete but unknowen to him his master has bigger plans for this child much darker ones. I think that Ken should grow furries as he begins to lose control of the digiworld as he tries to bring his savalinece system back on line unknowen to him Gotsmon will have completed a dark ring to capture one of the digidestined digimon and Kari plans to use it.
Aquamarine6996 chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
For some strange reason, I burst out laughing when Ken was like, 'god, I'm a messy eater.' HILARIOUS! Great story by the way. I am so following this story. :)
Cascade00 chapter 6 . 10/5/2013
Whoa! I just love how it's so dark! And I really love Kari and Ken together! I would love for Kari to convince ken to use Wormon and he'll be shocked how powerful he can be!
The French Demon chapter 10 . 2/26/2013
Ce n'est pas DarkAngewomon mais LadyDevimon :(
Le wiki le dit.
HitomiFeito chapter 15 . 8/11/2012
Hey hey hey! When r u goin 2 upload this is great!
Jade Lynne chapter 15 . 5/24/2011
This was very good. Even though it has been years. If you ever update it you have plenty of followers to read it. If not, that's your choice. Just a suggestion (i did this with a story not too long ago): if you are tired of the story or don't feel like updating you can always give the story to another author to finish. I'm sure there would be interested authors out there.

Either way, wonderful story.
xxpatixx chapter 15 . 11/13/2009
love it! i love the idae of Kari being evil! plz update soon
dreamer chapter 15 . 6/30/2009
i know it's been a few years since this has been updated, but this is definitely an exciting story, and i don't wanna be left at a cliffhanger!

if you get the chance, will you pretty please write another chapter? i wanna find out what happens.

just ... don't make Kari good again. Evil Kari is fun to read. however, if Gatomon turned good again, then there would be some serious conflict in this story ... muahaha! LOL ;D
bonnie chapter 15 . 8/17/2008
can not wait to read the next chapter!
bonnie chapter 15 . 8/10/2008
hope tthe next chaper is very good:) :) :) :)
Taeniaea chapter 15 . 7/17/2006
I Love The Chapter:15 Plz Plz Update It Soon!
Fredryck chapter 15 . 7/16/2006
Heh, I like this fic! The plot is quite original, and I like evil Kari :D! The only thing is, that Ken is a bit too clueless till now. I mean, he's the Emperor after all, Kari shouldn't be able to defeat him that easily...or to defeat him at all. She has better diplomacy maybe, but worse strategy and experience...
Matt'sxLuver chapter 15 . 7/13/2006
Wow.. Great story! _ Please update soon!
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