I liked this

Love it! I love how you portray Mephis :D

I've meant to review this for a long time, but I've never known what to say except that it's beautifully written and your portray of Mephis is exactly as I would expect: flawless. I love it.

Loved it!

Wow, really cool! Love the story from Mephis past, love the dialogue between him and Jaenelle, very nice!

Lol, drilling isn't pleasant for even Jaenelle

Absoluetly wonderful!

This was beautiful.

I rarely read enough for this character, so it was a treat to find this - and an even bigger treat to find such a good story, short but still deeply impressive.

This is going onto my fave list.

Fantastic. Deep. Brings "look beneath the surface" to mind.

::flails:: I loved your Mephis, and I maybe cried a little, and, really, just...awesome.

Mother Night, what a wonderful story! It was very in character, and a nice side story that fits well into the many stories of the Realms. Hedika reminds me of Joan of Arc, was that intentional?

Great job, hope you write more BJT stories.

Until then, may the Darkness embrace you.

Wonderful! Very like Bishop's voice and her penchant for backstories. So glad I was pointed this way! Looking forward to more from you! ~Vesica

This looks to be a really great series! Please update soon and tell us more about the SaDiablo family!

This is wonderful gap filler, I'm so glad to have found it! I love these books, have been tempted to write for some of the more minor characters myself. But seriously, this was very engaging and very sweet-yay for interaction between Jaenelle and brothers besides Lucivar! :)

Wow! This is a sweet and well-written oneshot. I love Mephis too, and I wish his character was explored a bit more in the Trilogy. I really enjoyed this story and hope to see more from you in the near future.