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How come it's deleted? There are still people who enjoyed the story, plus it's been 4 years (I never got to read it but I want to by the looks of the reviews), please post it again.
And there's not many victim Sesshomaru stories D:

I don't know if you're still working on this or not, but...very nice, very gripping. And that's unusual, coming from me, seeing as I'm more of an IY fan than Sess fan. But I'd love to see how this whole thing pans out.

Thankx for the warning. But the story itself, since Inuyasha's breakdown, was totally crap, in my opinion. Kagome needs to hurry her ass up and save Inu and Sesshy before anything else happens. But its cool, if not a little sickning, but cool all the same.

-NOT A FLAMER! Constructive critism only!-

I was really intrigued with this story up until a seriously climatic point that regrettably makes me loose interest in your tale. The beginning was interesting, never before had I actually read more then the first chapter of a story that dealt with Inuyasha finding a raped Sesshomaru in the forest. Unlike the other tales like this, I was very curious to see what we were leading up to and where the plot would turn. It is certainly a creative plot I never expected the story to go, and I give credit to your ideas. Descriptive abilities were artsy, excellent and you captured the characters thoughts very well. Very regrettably the moment Inuyasha's mind was gone I was not only really sad, but the desire to go on was completely squelched. I skimmed the chapter or two beyond that to see what happened next and with Inuyasha’s thoughts gone from the story the edge keeping me interested was gone. Also seeing him do those things to Sesshomaru without even being himself was no longer dramatic with Inuyasha not there to witness what his body was doing, which to me felt essential. The man who took over his body also annoyed me in a way beyond his wrongdoings; he is just too weak and stupid for a position as powerful as he has been placed in. I really hope I am not offending you, annoying you or making you doubt your story with this review, and I also hope I am not coming off as an annoying babbling know it all, just trying to express my opinion to early in the morning for complex thought. This is more a personal issue with the tale then anything, I have never really found stories where Inuyasha was not the main focus interesting, and so I have a biased against seeing Sesshomaru suffer. Its just not as fulfilling as seeing Inuyasha suffer, lol. I will check out some more of your stuff, since your writing skills are definitely good, but I am sad to say this story lost my interest as soon as one of the two main characters of the story disappeared, possibly for a really long time into the plot. Either way, good job on the story, I hope my review was helpful as apposed to annoying, now I will leave this critique before I read it to many times and loose the guts to send it.

Keep it real,

Azmidiske

I think you deserve a lot more reviews than you have now. This story is great and a shame that only 52 reviews were given. I would think atleast two or three hundred (maybe more!) suit this story. Keep up the good work!

This story is amazing! The best stroy I have read in AGES! The plot is beautiful and awesome! You write beautifully! Your own characters are brilliantly made! I would be very proud of this piece of work if I were you. I also love how you made Sesshomaru. I've never seen him like this in anyother angsty stories about him. Will Inu Yasha disappear forever? It's sad, but brilliant! Update soon.

poor sesshomaru!

huh? what's happening? did he just scream? is that a bad thing? or a good thing? huh? i'm confussed!

um... what do i say? um that was good and all but you made sesshomaru a little weak. but we all need a little change, am i right? well on with the next chapter!

O.O what's going to happen? sesshomaru better not get hurt more. if he does i'll poke you! just kidding, lol.

how can he leave him? i know they have a bad past and all, but he's still his brother! but i'll have to read the next chapter to see if he actually leaves him be. anyways good chapter, on with the next, tootles.

that was good! i'm going to read the next chapter now! tootles!

My gosh. . .

I have to say I really disapointed. I didnt think this story would hit a low like this one. *shrugs* I can see some of the parts as okay but then other between the two. . .It was just disgusting. It might not be to others but it was to me. The brothers for crying out loud, I dont care even if someone else is controlling his body it was just plain wrong!

Also, I put your fic for my "Story of the Week" in my story I just updated. *winces* But reading this chapter. . .

*sighs* You did great job with grammer, and all of that other stuff.

Hopefully the next chapter will be a better one and I wont have to get on you.

Lol, yeah I agree. Us authurs are unapprechiated.

*shrugs* I now I am probalby sounding harsh but I am just putting what I thought about the chapter.

InuNightWalker

This is great, you have really good writing skills. Keep it up!