This is really good. You should write more ShikaTema!

Not naming them due to the fact that they themselves don't name each other was a great move. Kudos to you-dos-eh, that was dumb.

that was awsome! I wish I could have focused of it a little harder though... it was awsome. She was making two seperate poems, right? This was so well written! I love this pairing and it's so hard to find a decent fanfic for them. But this was perfect for me!

that was so cool! I really liked that.

When I first read it I thought 'this story's pretty good' but after I saw that the italicized words were her poem I went back over the story and found that I like it alot more than the first time. It's written really well. Good job!

I loved the poem, nice job. I like how you let us look at this pairing in a different way. x3 The words flowed, and your writing style is admirable. I loved it, awesome job!

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Nice! I really liked it! Write some more!

I thought this was very good, especially for a first time pairing and on short notice. I hope you'll write more shikatem; it's always good to read the relationship from the opposite perspective.

that was interesting. a good psychological indepth look at Temari and Shika. I like Shika a lot.

that was pretty cool especially the last lines!

I thought that was awesome! Very cool, and an original take on the pairing. The poem was well done too, and how it was arranged worked out. Great job!

i love your poem and the way Shikamaru responded to it :

Poem...poem...hehehe...u wrote poetry! ! ! ! :P Good job! :D mwahahahaha! Error! Error! hehehe. It's so true! ! ! ! ! an unstained table cloth does look betta, i mean who wants a spotted table cloth? clownie! AH! ANOTHER ONE-SHOT...jeez, always:P new pairing you haven't done before though! hehehe all without saying their names once You know what? Sasuke shoulda shown up once like randomly jsut for the fun of it!:D...or better yet! KAI! K-A-I!...hahaha...don't u love my idea! (i know u probably don't:P) well anyways...update!...or...like don't...something...uh yeah_