That was so good! I loved the way you closed off the end.

An very interesting take on Luna. Nice!

oh...

Wow! I love it! It's so well written and everything fits so well! You almost made me cry. You don't stop to amaze me with your writting style.

Wow! I liked the beginning, with Luna's question about compound interest, but then it became seriously good. Luna is very perceptive.

The first two lines are brilliant.

So is the pantry bit.

I agree with the other reviewer: I can believe your version of the veil episode, even if I don't *agree* with it or imagine it that way myself. Nice work.

Good one. Explains a bit of Luna. I wouldn't mind more of the early days of Lunas and Ginnies friendship.

Thanks, all. By the way, if you have never encountered a daisy with much more than 20 petals, it's because I meant its weedier cousin, the dandelion; sorry. Only Luna, or an equally loony fanfic author, would try to count petals on a dandelion!

Wow...

Well, the beginning was... not bad, just not really the way I imagine the younger Luna...

But the thing about the veil was great. Very interesting, quite original I think, and you made it quite believable.

II(:

Oh ho! When you mentioned them taking the veil to London I immediatley understood. Eek. That was-needless to say-eerie. But amazing.

Adjectives fail me, but amazing will have to do. I think your creativity is (again) amazing, and how had both veils...

Yeah. I dunno. That was just really cool.

Very interesting take on Luna. You've kept her battiness, her uncontrollable desire to be the ultimate observer, and her knack for knowing everything about everyone.

I have to admit, I was a bit skeptical when you introduced the veil, but you managed to tie it in very nicely with the quote from Order of the Phoenix.

Wonderful story!