Nyc story but it wasn't humorous

Bit of overly manufactured drama in there but it still managed to be a sweet little tale overall. Nice work.

Cute little one shot

Loved it!- Dan

Humorous, sweet, and a wonderful plot!

very cute story :)

Hi if you ever check the reviews for this tale, I would dearly love to know why it is you think that a guy could be that dense. Every guy I ever met in my rather long life (even those considered thick or stupid) know when they like a girl.

Also I would love to know where this stupid idea that you can't fancy your best friend, if you would simply stop to think about it for people to be best friends there has to be something there in the first place, it is a very short step from best friend to lover as can be seen by the fact that the majority of male/female best friend relationships end in marriage. I also hate it when folk write that it is ok for Ron to fancy Hermione but not Harry because she's his best friend.

poor snape!

i just couldnt help laughing at the mention of our dear snape

how i wonder that date would have gone. how about you write one

btw this was really a good piece of writing

good job

I liked this one it was pretty good. I love HHr. I hope that it really isn't completely squashed out of the picture.

This was so cute and so funny! Eww, Crab and Goyle and Flich! It was hilarious! I loved the parings(except them LOL) of RWLL, DMGW, and HPHG! Go Harmony!

I thought this story was really cute. I notice you have a Draco Ginny and Harry Hermione thing going on. Although I think it is cute it's just not something I think would happen. You did a great job with the organiztion of this story. You also had really good character development. I like your stories because when ever you describe Ron it's really funny. I would like it if you tried writing some marauder fiction. That could be quite entertaining. If for some reason you have a dislike for Marauder fiction you should read Priori Incantatem by fellytone. You would totally change your mind. Keep up the good work! :)

EI! Uber kawaii-ness! _ Twas so friggin cute! X3 And, it wasn't one of those poorly-written-half-a-page-the-romance-is-rushed-and-cheasy one-shots either. This one was wonderfully written and the romance was just perfect. I also loved how it didn't just end once Harry said 'I Love You' like so many other fanfictions and one-shots do.

Anyway, once again, wonderful job! -adds to favorites-

Aww, that was such a lovely piece of fluff. I thought I was going to die laughing from the line: “Crabbe and Goyle were in a very good mood and Harry, who noticed it, did not want to dwell further on the subject.” And Draco’s line about always being a ferret was priceless. And the thought of Harry babbling, trying to tell Hermione how he felt made me sigh dreamily several times. So adorable. Great job, hon!

Keep up the great work! Ü

aw! so cute! not a lot of FLUFFYness, but what can u do? u can only have so much FLUFF in a oneshot. GREAT story!

Mika Sono (call me mika-chan)

great story! did you base it on a book called flipped? cuz almost everything in this story happened in the part about the charity auction.