| Reviews for Death of the AMS: the Avatarverse Mary Sue |
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  Yozora chapter 1 . 2/21/2017 Beautiful just simply beautiful, a great piece like this just brings a tear to my eye. |
 Shutterfly Simmons chapter 2 . 2/22/2015 What the heck is "celestial bending? " at least Zuko killed her. |
| Shutterfly Simmons chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 Yes! All Mary Sue 's should die! |
| DrCaitlinSnow chapter 1 . 2/3/2015 I salute you, fellow warrior. You are a brave advocate of our righteous cause. |
| sfox88 chapter 5 . 10/4/2014 An Azula Mary-Sue? That's just wrong. I mean, Tai Lee I can imagine, but Azula, or Mai...(shivers) |
| A True Hufflepuff 13 chapter 2 . 9/13/2013 Oh my gosh, this is so hilarious. I cracked up in the first chapter when you were all "SHIELD YOUR EYES RUN AWAY HIDE THE CHILDREN!" Also, If you're still alive and active on this fanfiction website and like to correct your old mistakes- Zuko isn't an only child anymore, they introduced Azula in the second season. Or it might've been the end of the first season; I forget. If you aren't that kind of person, ignore this section of the review, because I don't think anyone but the author ever really cares about small mistakes like that, and if the author doesn't, then don't bother. ANYWAY... your future chapters will have to be pretty good if they're going to replace this one as my favorite so far. I'm not sure that's possible, but hey, you're a pretty darn hilarious writer. |
| MotherFlucker chapter 5 . 8/12/2013 Please update. This was so interesting, I really want to know why Iroh is scheming and what will happen to Azula! |
| Ribke chapter 5 . 11/3/2011 Wow, what is yer novel titled? And what is it about? And yes, Mary-Suism is a phase (I've been through that; many people's been through that). |
| Sarloos chapter 2 . 12/2/2009 ...-snerk- ...Thugh I really need to stop reading these things, the weirder of my OCs seem to come from them. For example, there is now a water phobic firebender running around in my head with burns all up his arms from a rather...interesting explosion involving fireworks and alchohol...that he repeated...twice... |
| MireiLovett1846 chapter 5 . 3/14/2009 Oh, my... XP ASuela? WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO? Update soon... I guess... :) |
| MireiLovett1846 chapter 4 . 3/14/2009 Oh lord... May Hanashini Kashifotu and all her othehr kimono-clad comrades with diagonally cut hair and hourglass figures burn in the speical ring of hell reserved for Mary Sues forever. That's my way of saying "What a great chapter!" |
| MireiLovett1846 chapter 3 . 3/14/2009 MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was brilliant! Plenty of ice out there tonight... *evil smirk* |
| MireiLovett1846 chapter 2 . 3/14/2009 Jewelle Ebonywings is indubitably one of the worst Mary Sues I have read... I loved how Zuko handled her: "Are you done?" |
| MireiLovett1846 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009 Yep, I pretty much feel the same way about Mary Sues... |
| Shadowhawke chapter 4 . 11/2/2008 Whoah. That was very, very scary. But awesome, funny work yet again. :D |
