i kinda liked it! but i think u could keep writing! it isnt really finished!

This is a really interesting idea. Who was the boy? It sounded like either Inuyasha or Kouga... maybe you included that but I didn't read carefully enough. O.- Perhaps I shall go check?

It was... Erm... I need a word! *panics* Erm... erm...

*calms down* Anyways, I loved it. I really, really did. One of my favorite of yours.

It's... not Lovely Despair. It's not so blatantly, erm... depressing. But they must be relatives or something. I'll have to come up with a name for this. I've seen/felt it before, too.

Either way... it's very good.

Why... why oh, why have I not read this yet? I guess I truly am horrid at keeping up with this stuff. But that was very good. Quite interesting. You always have the most original ideas. And it's well written, of course.

(wide eyes) you are gonig to write more, right? Please? It's so...cool!

(eyes go wide) Wow. I love it!

I'm loving this story so far, in fact I love all your stories. Hehe. I hope you continue on with them soon. Actually, I appreciate that you're one of the authors on this site that really spellchecks.

Cya! _*

I promised myself I would never start another review for you with 'wow'. So,

Wowzers.

Ahem. There was a very tense feel to this chapter, that I'm sure everyone has felt at one time or another. Running away and hiding, afraid that someone will catch you (albeit with less alarming circumstances).

I enjoyed how this story looped back, taking Kagura around to where the story began. And the adjectives and imagaery...macabre.

Kalliel

Hi again. You must be getting tired of my pointless reviews by now.

At first I really didn't remember what happened last chapter, except that it was Kagura, but I do think I remember now...

Personally, I liked the message that went with this within Kagura's narrative. It's one of those adolescent-theme type things, but...how to say... but not.

I'm really not making any sense.

Kalliel

Woah... That was so freakishy wonderful. I loved it. But this is the last past, isn't it? So sad.

oh, please say this is more than three chapters, its very exciting and we don't get to see that many Kagura centric fics around, so I would like to see this go on a little longer.

This made me happy. Weird, yes. But I love the way you write, and I really loved this!

Wow. (How many reviews have a started like that, anyway?)

Ah, lackaday. In between stories, I always forget the way you write. So, every time, it manages to completely blow me away.

I kinda read through this quickly (while listening to Ricky Martin, which -really- did't help), so I'm confused as to who the white haired person that Kagura thought was Kanna was-Inuyasha? Sesshoumaru?

I thought it was Naraku, but...he doens't have white hair normally...O_o

In any case, I think this would make a great chapter story, but I'm fine with it being a oneshot as well. That didn't help, did it?

Oh dear. I'll shut up now. (Livin' la vida loca~~!)

Kalliel