Wow. An well-written one-shot that could've been even better as a multi-chaptered fic. You captured the character's personalities perfectly and the essence of School Rumble even better.

This was a good read.

If you don't mind, I would like to do something similar to this, not a complete copy. In fact, this is more of an inspiration. You see, I'm on a mission to try and convince the man himself to bring back School Rumble to its original glory. Being six years, I'm sure you know by now that School Rumble ended with false happiness. I'm trying to change that.

Cheers

id recommend you finish this story but then again its up to you if you want to finish it btw its awesome so far wish i could know what happens at the end! XD all in all, it deserves to be a chapter series fic :)

- YamadaTsukamoto

This was a very good one-shot. You portrayed the characters mental processes well and made them act like how Kobayashi would make them act. Shame that this is only a one-shot, as I can picture this being a 5 chapter series. Good Job!

aww such a cute one-shot! YakumoxHarima is my fave school rumble character

Aw... great story! . it warms my heart! XD

You know you never realize certain things until sombody else says something about them. I mean I never would have thougt of that as a reason Yakumo fell for Harima. Great story.

Aw... what a cute one shot. Thank you! It made me smile.

Heh, I'm liking a number of your stories. This one is very good and follows along the same thoughts that I've had about Yakumo. Yakumo is a strong willed person able to walk through her life day after day with those thoughts around her all the time.

Harima must seem like a refuge, an enigma as well. I love the pairing between these two. I think this story works very good as a one-shot, whether you continue or not is on you, but this is very well done.

One thing though, as he is her senpai and also due to her personality, Yakumo calls Harima by -san rather than -kun. Only thing that stood out to me. Very good job, when I get the time, I'll read your others.

Creme de Menthe is another of my favorites of yours. Thanks for contributing your writings for all to enjoy.

Tragic that its only a one shot.

I'll add this to my alert list only as a fleeting hope.

Don Piano

Wah, too good to be a one-shot!

Open up this story again and expand on it, please '(

*Sigh* Why can't Harima notice Yakumo is the girl he should like NOT Tenma. Tenma is a block-head...who can fall in love with her? (Besides Nara, he can have her he looks "kiddy" like Tenma.)

One of my fave fanfics so far... how could it be a one shot? ah... now ive gotta find something else to read. darn.

aw... thats sweet... how about a continuation of this story?

A great story, with a very realistic outlook on a person's deeper, not very ideal thoughts. I hope you continue with this work, despite it being a oneshot. It was a great pleasure reading it.