Such a good story!

Excellent story, enjoyed it a lot, thanks!

Im really enjoying reading this I really hope you decide to continue it!

He should make Kreig do the toothbrush scrubbing as well; cause we all know it really was all his idea :) Can't wait for more!

Hi Swasti,

Just read your fic so far. Enjoying it. Looking forward to reading more when you post it up.

Cadi.

Wow, I think you nailed Lucas and Ben down pat. As well as Bridger. You definitly have to keep this story going. I want more.

Nice. I don't know if you're planning on continuing this further or if that's the last chapter (it works either way, so it's hard to tell) but I really like it. I will say that if you do write more, I will be gleefully happy to read them and review.

hello,

I think there is someone missing on board of seaQuest and this

is a person who takes care about all the crewmen to eat enough.

especially lucas need someone. the captain can't always bring

him his meal it must be someone else who has the time to look

after the boy.

poor boy, ben tried to fix something on his own and made it

worse than before.

I like the friendship between lucas and darwin. whenever I see

them together I have to smile, this makes me lucky. ;)

*lol* a tornado on seaQuest... uhm... maybe it could be.

something stranges happend and there'll be a tornado. this

could be a new fanfic idea.

it's hard for a child to know to be a mistake of your mother. I

know it for myself and I feel it whenever my mother isn't in a

good mood. this is terrible and I know exactly how lucas felt

when he is thinking of his mum.

I want to hug darwin, he is so cute! okay, and be the end of

chapter four I want to hug lucas to make him feel better. this

is really sad. why he isn't talking to the captain? he must

feel that he could help him!

the thoughts of bridger show exactly what I think about lucas

being a very smart person, an individual with a to high IQ but

still in some ways a normal teenager with needs for love and

respect.

the idea to buy some tickets for a conference lucas want to go

is great! bridger is smart too! haha...

_ bridger: commander?

ford: yes, sir?

bridger: will you come to a conference with me? don't ask, only

agree or disagree!

ford: *completly confused* ... sir? is this an order?

bridger: *thinks about it* ok, yes it is an order!

ford: than I have to agree... *is still really confused*

something like that?

I am sure whenever you wrote lucas ran through his hair kiddo

was very happy! she told me once she like this gesture of

him. ;p

LOL here lucas said himself bridger has to order ford to join

him at the conference.

lucas only began to hate pals? I hate them and I always forget

them in my fanfics. whenever there is a problem someone asked

me what about the pal... you can't have them always around with

you and then ...there is something like forget it! mostly on

purpose.

finally a scene between lucas and ben! what for a welcome

change in the story where lucas bridger and lucas are most of

the time in. (sorry for my grammar and all)

oh oh... what does the two of them have done? red uniforms? and

than with a toothbrush... bridger, this is not fair!

what'll hudson ordered them to do after this joke, has somebody

thought about it?

ok, now I think I am finished and I am going to check if there

is another new chapter.

with many greetings

yury

I like! I like! Great story! Love the way it is headed! Please continue! I would really like to see where you take it next!

whine

swasti!

Please update soon?

:)

hi swasti!

it is always ford! couldn't this guy be more relaxed in some situations? maybe he needs a shoreleave?

uh, how nice this secretary is. I think I gave her one of my stories the name hudson? she was such a sympathic person.

I think lucas needs more selfconfidence. to think about he is worthless with his smartness is really stupid.

till now I like the story and I am really excited about what'll happen.

bye yury

More! Soon! Island!

You reduce me to single words.

Hi Swasti,

yeah, it makes me also wonder how good the food is. I also can imagine that this changed from season to season.

Oh and I still love it when Ben speaks about the so called „food“.

Oh, oh. I think everyone should be scared when Ben says something like: „Just the person I was looking for.“

Oh, oh, again. You should never mix a bored genius and Ben Krieg.

Poor Tim :-)

I also believe that Krieg and Robert were good friends.

And the toothbrush thing is sweet.

Again a lovely chapter. I’m looking forward to the next one.

Greetings Kiddo

I've been following your story all along...just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed this last chapter. Bridger's conversation with Lucas was priceless! Maybe your best chapter yet!

Happy Writing!

Tess

Another great chapter. I just love reading Ben and Lucas. I never actually saw series one, but I can imagine they were great friends.

Having to review from work (again!)

Love,

Lynn

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