Aw, that was very nice!

This is very sweet, I love this. You got the characters really well. Great story!

beautiful and heartbreaking after all these years of reading :)

I love your writing.

Wow! I love your Obi Wan/ Qui Gon stories. You capture their characters very well. You have written some of my favourite fics.

aww wow excellent quigon obi fluff and wronged judgements. i know its weird but i really enjoy stories like this with these two! so glad you wrote this then :D

the beginning was a little awkward to read in that it was a little confusing but overall it was very good.

Beautiful, breathtaking little slice of h/c/angst! I think all of your fanfics are great, but this one just tops them all. You've done yourself proud, Luv. Keep up the good work! P.S. Maybe you could write this story through Obi's POV? I'm sure we'd all love to hear what was going thhrough his mind during this little episode.

Aww! That was amazing! It is definitely my favorite piece by you so far! It was just epic and... wow.

Excellent job!

Wow, I can't believe I never reviewed this one. It has to be one of my favorites; considering that you've written well over sixty stories to pick just one is impossible.

The situation portrayed in this is so realistic, as is Qui and Obis' reactions. The angst is awesome.

Great Job! :-)

-TheMacUnleashed/ JediWolfMaster

Poor Obi-Wan. He's so amazing! :D

Slowly but surely making my way through all of your excellent stories. This is one of the best Qui and Obi stories I've ever read. Aside from his self-doubting and occasional uncertainty, Obi-Wan really is perfect. Pure light. *sigh* You capture it so well.

Aww, that last line, "I'll stay with you," was really sweet. This story was very autehnic in its orginanaltiy, very entertaing, I really enjoyed it!

Yes, I am incredibly late with this review, but I have a reason-kind of.

I'd read this story some time ago...and then for whatever reason, I didn't have time to leave the review I wanted. And then a while later, I was thinking of the story, and really wanted to read it again, and I could NOT remember the name of it, or who wrote it (I should have realized it was you!) or anything, so I have been searching this site for AGES!

Anyway, obviously I found it, so here is an actual review;

I love this. I love it because it contains all of the Q/O angst that I look for, but it doesn't stray into the unrealistic, or the unnecessarily cruel. Sometimes, when I read these fics, I have trouble understanding where Qui is coming from when he is so cold to Obi. But you handled him so beautifully in this. This is why you are among my favorite authors.

I saw in your profile that you are moving into original work-hooray! You are very talented. But I will miss new things from you here.

Okay, I have a lot of stuff to review-I'm just now catching up on some of your work! And this may be the longest review ever. Sorry.

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Some wonderful angst in there! Good job! :) This goes right into my favorite stories list.

Such a beautiful story, I am in awe of your writing talent. I'm sad to hear that you won't be writing any more SW stories, you will be missed. The emotions were so real and the pain was so real everything was just right on. I loved it!