The Cyclonus-Red Alert interest is so crazy it bloody well works. I really, really wish you'd continue writing these ideas.

XD The ending killed me!

Could you make a squeal? Please? I really enjoyed it!

XD Cyc acting like a total loon is always funny.

Keep it up, Cyc and Demmy!

Please, please, PLEASE update this!

Do I sence another pairing here? If I thought Jets and Screamer was a cool pairing, this one should be interesting to follow, to say the least.*nods* You have this habit of making pairings work, even if they really shoudn't. That is SO not a bad thing. Even if you weren't putting them together that way, I think you should. And btw congrats on getting my longest review in the history of forever! YAY! *clap*

I've read this fic before, and somehow I forgot to review. It's time to rectify the situation.

What we have here is just another example of why you are one of my favorite authors. As funny as it is to see Cyclonus pining over Red Alert, it's also kind of sad in a melancholy way. He really is trying his hardest to work up the nerve to say something to the real Red Alert, but circumstances will forever prevent this from happening.

I loved the part where Cyclonus talked about going to find a nice view together. It was so sweet! Of course, he defaulted back to what he knows, which is destruction and chaos, but his almost playful "Let's fight." made me think of a good-natured wrestling match more than a life or death battle with guns or lasers.

And poor Demolisher. For all intents and purposes, Cyclonus is as close to a best friend as he'll ever get, even if he is a complete whack job, and it's nice to see Demolisher looking out for him via looking out for the Decepticon cause.

As always, a marvelous piece of fanfiction. I'd love to see another story where Cyclonus and Red Alert maybe do hook up, if only for a little while.

Love between Decepticons and Autobots will forever be bittersweet, but a writer is nothing if they don't evoke emotions in their reader. Once again, you have tugged at the 'ol heart strings. You, my friend, are brilliant. (And no, that's not just lip service.)

I don't lnow weather to laugh or not...

Enxcellent work! *gives thumbs up* I've read alot of fics on the net, but not once have I countered this pairing. If I don't count your fics, that is. This was a good story and a bit funny too. I really thought he spoke to the real Red for a moment. Demolisher was just priceless with that comment: "I live with maniacs. And I don’t even care anymore." Way to go! ;D

Aww... that was adorable.

*glomps Cyclonus, Red and Indigo all at once*

*then falls over laughing* Constructive criticism? Me? Nah. _ (Loveitloveitloveitloveit...)

The Red Alert/Cyclonus possible pairing is making some progress! FINALLY! *claps her hands*

Alright, this is just Cyc trying to talk to a hologram, but he seems genuinely interested in Red now, not just curious about 'what that crazy Autobot is going to do'. At least he admits to like 'Ambulance boy' in some way, even though he didn't realize it completely. Figures. Only Cyc could do something like that -_-'

On the other hand, Red Alert seems really oblivious about EVERYTHING. For being a rather intelligent 'bot, surely he is lost here... he doesn't really know how to handle Cyc, right?

He doesn't even know why he talked with him of Hot Shot's and Wheeljack's condition in 'Power Cut'... if it continues like this, maybe only a hit on the head would make him realize something...

Glad to see that something is beginning to move for that two, too! -

I can't wait to see how this will evolve!

PS I tried to send you an e-mail with my new account, tell me if you got it, ok? Bye!

*Sniffle* Time was when you could't get a decent Cyclonus or Demolisher fic for love nor money. And now... *sniffle* I'm just so happy!

I actually thought Cyclonus was speaking to the real Red Alert at first, and then it dawned on me as I went on that there really should be some response, if only in the way of a blank stare. Very, very good. Love the odd little relationship between those two. :)

As Seiberwing has noted the minor smushing of words, and I have nothing better in the way of helpfulness to offer, I will go on to something more or less unrelated, and beg to be permitted to post a link to 'Devils and Black Sheep' on the new CPS site. Because it's great, it has Thrust and, erm, yes. *Cough* Please?

Anyhow, update soon! (Must... have... fic..)

~Pivot

Yes,such slashy goodness Indigo!*smacks lips* Yeah,I know Cyclonus is a nutjob,but he's my favorite nutjob.I really love how he seems to be always questioning his own thought processes,if that's possible,(hey,it IS Cyc we're talking about here;-).My favorite scene has to be when he was thinking up a more suitable nickname than Ambulance-boy,then he ends up going back to that name anyway,lol! "Hey!Ambulance-boy!" He heard himself speak,and have to come up with sumthin' better than that,he thought ...Red? No.R.D.? 'Lert? Redster? -boy would have to do,for now.I'm so glad "Demmy" did'nt tell Megatron about Cyc's umm,"fascination" with Red Alert,although Meg's reaction to hearing this news would have been you know you just can't "cliffie" this fic,right Indigo? Indigo?

o... this is looking good! XD Update MORE! I quite like this!