Reviews for Out of Luck
gginsc chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
HATE YOU! HOW DARE YOU KILL HIM!
Ashleigh chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
It's a great story but you refer yo leolas as 'blonde' too much. Also the death part should be more dramatic :)
Chewiecotton chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
very good
Caelhir chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Hey, this is really good :) I am kind of a character death person (sometimes) so great job on this work!
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
A great story. Very well written.
RaithsEnvyMe chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Legolas is DEAD! THAT SUCKS!

Loved the story, though.
Brilliant5 chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
*hyperventilates*

you...you...you...KILLED HIM!

how could you?

you killed my beloved elf ;_;

I love you for it. *kills bird*
Konoko89 chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Ohayo! Another amazing piece of work! Sad and terribly depressing, but nontheless and amazing work of art!
StarLight9 chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
That was really good. I love your stories, they are always so original and different. And it makes perfect sense - they get into trouble all the time and luck saves them. Well, of course luck should betray them at last. Very well done, I truely enjoyed it.
Team Sherlock and Watson chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
You killed Legolas? You killed my elf-buddy? *I cry along with Aragorn* Very good and sad story. The way you ended it sent chills down my spine. Don't change anything, it is good as is.
babyinuy 317 chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Thires gota be moore is thire please tell me that u r going to write some moore!
yllom21 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Aww, I thought he would get up! (Sniff) Poor Legolas!

Excellent story! Although I thought you should have put more detail into the dying part.

Fantastic job!
oxSeeWhatISeexo chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
LEGGI! *cries buckets of tears* that was good! not just good...really good
Catmint chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
*sniffle* So sad. Good work.
Midnightdreamr chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
*Wipes tears from eyes, but there is no use, another contiues to come after the wiped one.* WHYD DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HIM? WHY? WHY? *Still crying* Great story though, but very SAD! *Goes to corner to continue crying*

-CklovesMe2040
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