An amusing story. I'm sorry it was apparently abandoned as an unfinished piece.
Dec 2018

This is absolutely brilliant! I know you haven't updated this story on a very long while, but I'm not above begging pitifully for you to finish it! :)

Pretty please? :)

Interesting. Poor Hermione doesn't know what she's gotten herself into. :) And Tony doesn't quite know what's going on either. I'd like to see more of the relationship between Sarah, Jareth, and Tony, as well as more of Tony in a fey sense.

Don't give up!

Ruin

It kills me that this story hasn't been updated in like four years, because IT'S SO AMAZING. You have the quirkiest way of writing, and I love it. I'm addicted to all your stories (have been for years, I'll admit) and I finally decided to read this one, and discovered how delightful it is. I usually never read OC stuff, but you've pulled it off perfectly. Tony is as realistic as you can make a magical prince of the Goblin World.

Pretty much, I love when you write...anything. In fact, now I'm probably going to go reread your LuciusxHermione stories, because they make me so darn happy.

Well written, beautifully characterised, and funny. What a pity that it seems to be abandoned, but I hope you have found a busy life to take its place. Thank you for sharing what you have.

hehe... this is quite awesome. i love the concept and you've written it brilliantly. please, more?

ah, this one hasn't been updated in ages (like mine! lol) but I really like how you've got it going. I'm gonna bookmark it incase you start writing on it once more; I'd love to read whatever's to come next! _ ::waves:: Much luck in your writings hun! Blessed Be!

What a wonderful crossover! I would never have thought of combining these two, but they fit together so wonderfully. And I adore Tony. He is very much his father's son! Oh and 'he who kicks goblins'? Genius! XD

I've just realized that this wasn't finished, and I had just assumed that it was, when it hadn't for the past five years. My heart almost broke.

Finish? Please?

“...Something happened between them, a fight of some sort.”

“Probably wouldn’t let her keep any country she successfully invaded in his name.” - Best. Line. EVAR.

*squeals like the caterwauling lovechild of an orgasming pig and a banshee on the job*

I... I can't even begin to tell you how much I really, really like "Most Unusual". I find the whole concept creative, original, and utterly intriguing. I've always been on the lookout for decent Labyrinth/HP crossovers, but prior to "Most Unusual," I had not. Now... I have.

I've never thought about Hermione Granger and any son of Jareth and Sarah in the same sentence, much less the same thought. Now that I have, the mere idea is so very tempting. Thanks for making life more interesting!

This chapter, however short it was, has made me incredibly, freakishly excited. And delighted, upon discovering that it's already complete. This is AWESOME.

2 years since you last posted an update from chapter 15 to 16, wow! I'm glad you were able to continue after that much of a time lapse. _ Well I am glad the direction the story took and if you ever continue it, I will be glad to read the upcoming chapters :)

Fantastically done _

Looks like 3 of our players just realized the truth :)