Reviews for The Darkness Within The Light
mumphie chapter 13 . 6/30/2019
A very good story. It seems that you started and wrote many stories during this time, but didn't finish many of them. That means that either you started school, a job, a family, had a tragedy, or lost the muse. I hope it wasn't something tragic. I also hope that when life becomes less busy? that you will come back and finish this one. Perhaps a summary to where you wanted it to go?
mumphie chapter 6 . 6/30/2019
I hope you don't pair up Harry with Bella - she's old enough to be his mom! I know that when they are 61 and 90, it won't make much of a difference...er...maybe even then!
mumphie chapter 4 . 6/29/2019
Ummm...he couldn't send a letter?
mumphie chapter 1 . 6/29/2019
Interesting twist. I don't think I've seen Ghost Rider Sirius before. (he did ride a motorcycle)
RebeccaRoy chapter 7 . 12/4/2018
Wow, nice animagmus form there.
RebeccaRoy chapter 5 . 12/4/2018
Well, looks as if Harry is going to get his freedom here, which I like seeing.
Erimenthe chapter 13 . 7/15/2018
Another story I hope you continue. You are very good at writing stories that are so different from each other, and others, that I find many of them on my follow list lol. I don't know whether to hope for Ginny or Kaela lol. I like that Bella got a new chance at life with this and I hope that Brian steps up (without Dumbles finding out).
seldombites chapter 13 . 4/26/2018
This is a good story so far. It's a shame it appears to be abandoned. I will add it to my follows in case you ever decide to continue writing or to adopt it out to someone else.
Old enough to be chapter 4 . 1/19/2018
Bella is old enough to be his mother. Plus, you forget she was crazy talking him in the atrium as well as dissing him. Old, old enough to be that fourteen year old's mother. Yeah, if you are thirty and someone is forty, not as big of a deal, but she is at least thirty and he is fourteen ... pedo, pedo, weird, squicky, pedo.
aresthegodofwar chapter 13 . 12/23/2017
are you going to finish the story
Pushi19 chapter 13 . 1/7/2017
Update please
ReinaReynaRaina chapter 13 . 10/23/2016
Please update soon and i think you should make this a Ginny/Harry pairing.
Nigel943 chapter 2 . 8/20/2016
Why the good stories always have AN's longer than the freaking chapter
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 7 . 7/15/2016
I think I'll stop reading here. I know the story isn't finished so I might as well find a good stopping point. It's just not that interesting now that Voldemort and the Dursleys and Bellatrix have all been dealt with. And Harry's not planning to go back to Hogwarts so he doesn't have to deal with Draco or Snape. In short, all the villains are gone leaving only Dumbledore to create tension with. Plus, my favorite pairing (Harry/Luna) isn't even in the running and I'm already gagging at the Harry/Bella relationship and displeased with the Harry/Ginny relationship. Remind me again why Harry would find his chief fangirl attractive as a mate?

The canon prophesy being fake and covering up for the real prophesy is an interesting take. But it doesn't explain all of Dumbledore's actions. "Hidden from the Dark Lord at the cost of the innocent" doesn't mean that Dumbledore has to add to the misery of the innocent over and above misdirecting Voldemort into attacking him. There's no reason for Dumbledore to manipulate the Dursleys into hating Harry. Heck, there's no reason to place Harry with the Dursleys to begin with. Since Harry isn't the subject of the real prophesy there's no reason why Dumbledore needs to worry about keeping him alive at all. If Voldemort or his followers kills Harry, so what? He's just an innocent casualty of the real prophesy. But he's not instrumental at all in getting rid of Voldemort permanently. For that he's got Brian, and he's still safe even if Harry dies, as long as the real prophesy is unknown. If Harry's not the real child of prophesy, just a decoy, then Dumbledore can let Hagrid give Harry to Sirius and let Sirius worry about protecting Harry from the residual Death Eaters.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 2 . 7/15/2016
Excellent line: "grinning like the Grim that chased the animagus cat up the Whomping Willow."
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