The wonderful body did it for me. I'm not reading this.
Borys

Wow! Never expected him to come to her :)

very good story. like it a lot keep writing.

Unfortunately, your character is indescribably self-absorbed, rude, irritating, and either naive, or just plain stupid. If she knew about Rohan and medieval culture from reading the books, she would not behave in so rash a manner, and cuss out everything that moved. After all, her life depends on the goodwill of the king, and his advisers. This is NOT 21st century society and culture we are dealing with here.

Writing such a disrespectful and generally mean character, will only endear you to twelve year olds that are searching for a self-insert fantasy. If that is what you were aiming for- congratulations, you hit your mark! If, however, you want something that is moderately well written, and even slightly plausible to other readers, you need to edit this.

Hateful, rude, and harsh people are not enjoyable in real life, and even less so in fiction. Don't sell your talent short- you could certainly write something that would bring pleasure to your readers, and garner praise for your efforts. The number of reviews you have received for this piece alone, should be an indicator of a problem.

I wish you the best in your endeavors.

mary sue alert...

that was a wonderfully written love story! I laughed my ass off, teared up at more than one occasion, and of course swore, and swooned at many parts to!LOL,I squealed when Eomer said" and to think I thought you a lady" lets just say I was super happy!lol, it was soo cute when they were arguing about thier relationship adn she answered "Because I love you too *oh shit, why did I tell him that?* I thought you depicted Eomer's character very well, as well as everyones else's:) may I ask what or who was you inspiration for Ari? she is an awesome kick ass character

Hey,

I love the story, i am really enjoying reading it.

please more ari and erik

I'm enjoying re-reading your story!

It's a pleasure to re-visit well written, action oriented stories!

:)

mk

Hey! That was really nice. I hope there might be some adventures they have. Wished there were more.

Navaer!

love it

I loved this story. Please tell me that your doing a sequel! PLEASE!

Jut a hint but it would be cool if they went back to Middle Earth to live and Eomer became King. Just a suggestion.

Look forward to any updates!

Wow! I can't believe others haven't discovered your story. It's now on my favorites list!

I'm eager to read the sequel!

what a cool fic!

Its over! Really! NO! I wanna read more! I wish I showed up sooner, then I could've reviewed more. But I'm sick, my b-day was yesterday and its Spring Break! (YAYAYAYAYAYAY!) So, all in all, I've been busy! I wonder what ~Other~ stories you have and if their as good as this one... *Grins*