Oooh.. so good
You DEFINITELY don't check these review anymore, seeing that it's been almost ten yrs since u posted this

BTW like I said, you don't check, but someone outta fix those typo mistakes n all. Even I can write a lil better..

I love your story!

This story rox!

mushy, but very good! write more, especially bb/rae fics.

p.s. i loved the thoughts about terra ( bitch, whore..) because it defenitely describes her!

aww, the nice happy ending...HOORAY, TERRA'S GONE! :)

i hope the floor that bb pushed terra onto was tile. :b

BBxRae fics are awesome, there's no doubt about it, but in my opinion you need a bit of work. For starters, you might want to check your grammar. Spelling is okay, but perhaps you could try and use a bigger vocabulary. Also, you need some work in the punctuation department; you need more commas and exclaimation marks.

Second, your storyline is great but it's too cliche. I find a lot of stories that have the whole Raven-gets-mad-at-someone-usually-terra-and-goes-crazy-and-bb-realizes-the-only-way-to-stop-raven's-wrath-is-to-confess-his-love-to-her kind of theme. Not that it's bad or anything, just that, like i said, it's too cliche. It's repeated too often. Furthermore, the whole raven-and-beast-boy-kissing-in-the-sunset dealie: WAY trite. Again, nothing wrong with a little romance and fluff, but you could try to make it a bit more unique.

Also, they seem a bit OOC, especially raven and beast boy. beast boy is a jokester, constantly cracking jokes and trying to get raven to laugh. raven is a monotonal, unemotional girl who thinks bb's futile attempts at making her laugh are pointless, annoying and slightly amusing. i mean, come on. anyone who watches the show knows that. get it right already!

Sorry if this whole thing seems like a big, long, pointless rant, but i have a reviewer like this, Renee25 (yes, Renee25 i am using your name), and although it seems like her reviews were a bit flamey, i find it did help me to get some constructive criticism. i had no idea how much she had helped me until i saw it for myself. Anyway, you're a great author but you just need a wee bit of fine-tuning. Besides that keep up the good work and you'll be awesome in no time!

~Xentarah

Pretty good, but watch the typos.

EVIL TYPOS WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD! MOO HA HA!

:O

that was very short and kind of quick story how fast do you type? so it was very quick story but any way nice fic! :)

aw! I loved it!

o cool i can't believe they went to a carnival without raven jerks and terra i bet she was just scared of raven and she didn't give shit about the team

Please make Terra Try to kill Raven! (catfight!Meow!)

And Terra heard of it! *manicial laughter*

awesome cahppie! Pleawse update asap

really really good. (today is a lazy day for me. maybe if you update real soon, i will un-lazy myself and write a proper review!) ;)