The way you wrote Sean was SO fascinating. Because, we as readers know his way of thinking is fucked up, but you captured how in Sean's head, he thinks he's a justified force, the protector, the one in the right. I feel like you captured blind, self-righteous bigotry so well.

Seeing a romance from the eyes of an antagonist who hates them is pretty cool. :O

Ahhhh Frieda is so sweet and supportive ;O; I loved reading this.

And poor Richie! I love how Frieda comforted him and he eas able to confide in her.

Oh, my heart, poor Daisy. I think she's wonderful, I'm so sad she feels so second best in some ways. :c

(I'm sad Richie doesn't wave at her!)

Precious. Ahhh I love seeing them just care for each other and be comfortable in each other's space

This is amazing! I love how you characterize everyone so well, especially Daisy and Frieda and Mr. Foley(!). Also, Daisy/Frieda? Yes!

hi I'm just a reader and I'm going to save your story in my bookmarks and hope you continue it :)

This is awesome! Please update pleaaaase! o.o

Well, it's too bad this isn't going to be continued, because it was excellent! Great job. Bravo.
And you managed to make me understand Richie's dad. Sigh... poor guy. Doesn't even realize how wrong he is...

Ha, love the way you write Hotsteak.

Yeah, you go Frieda! Save Daisy from her own feelings that're going to get her in really big trouble.

Ohhoho, Richie is CLINGY, you say? That pun would work way better if his hoodie was made of wool.
Also, Dasiy's terrible luck is as sad as it is amusing.

The real question is: How many "platonic solid" puns can Richie make throughout the course of this story?
My money's on: A BUNCH.

What the heck was up with that "that one time" paragraph? It was kinda sloppy, and didn't really seem to follow the flow of the rest of Virgil's thoughts and the story. What, they hugged or something? Headbutt to the balls? Accidental kiss? No, even better, they were sitting up leaning towards each other, when they lost consciousness and the sound of their foreheads meeting made a sound similar to two coconuts being knocked together. HA, must've hurt!

I think this is probably the best (maybe only?) point of veiw from Mr. Foley I've read. I really like how you didn't just make him some evil man, but explained his motivations that otherwise look like flaws. It made him very human.

*favorites*

Why am I never able to find a good SS fic that had been updated recently or finished? This is really good and I hope that you will continue it some day. I'll put it on alert just in case I guess.