- That was cute. ._. Temari and Gaara are two of my favorite characters. ((Gasp?)) I love the family relationship they have. Like a silent understanding. _ It's... Pretty. P *Faves*

very nice. I would say more, but I probably wouldn't say anything to do it justice.

Wow this is so beautiful. And written very well. It made me smile at the end the same time Temari smiled. I love this story.

Really, really beautiful.

I like oneshots like this one: short but intense and well-written! :)

Added to my FS list.

Where to start to describe this wonderful piece...BEAUTIFUL imagery. Your descriptions of her training seemed so fluid and I could picture it so vividly. My favourite part, though, was where you described Gaara's emergence from the sand, and their whole, primitive sort of interaction, as the real Gaara observed from a distance.

There was no dialogue, but you couldn't tell it was missing, because the rest was so captivating. I LOVED this, and will definitely be adding it to my Sand Sib Symposium.

*sigh* My only critique? I wished it was longer. _