I loved this story too! Even though you wrote it first, I read Phil's POV first and this is a nice compliment to it! I laughed so hard about Keely's feelings about geometry (I remember sitting and complaining about the exact same thing to my dad, who has a degree in math) and I really could relate to your descriptions about how Keely felt about falling for Phil (I've fallen for one of my best friends hard too-although I don't have nearly enough courage to tell him how I feel).

Again, you have spot on characterizations-I couldn't help but laugh at most of Pim's comments and you wrote the relationship between Phil and Keely perfectly. Both of your stories are going down as two of my all time favorite fan fics!

loved it update soon

Holy cow, this sounds like MY diary! lol! Good job!

Okay, so I'm still in the middle of reading this, but I thought I'd leave a comment now in case I forget/never get around to it later. I absolutely love this story! It's so good! :]

Awesome story! SWEET CLAM CHOWDER! Who is Seth and where is Owen?

it was good the first chapter even I didn't catch your mistake

GETTING MARRIED!:( WHAT!

it was ok but a little too much kissing. the best part was when keely's mom was pulling into the d-way and say phil, with sparkly lip gloss on,walking down the d-way dillio

THEY SHOULD HAVE BROKEN UP PERMINITLY! ! I HATE THIS ENTRY BECAUSE IT IS TO MUSHY!

Wow...I'm speechless. The wording of that last chapter even gave me the chills...pure brilliance.

Hey! I was trying to skip around a bit, as to not bombard you with so many reviews. But I just HAD to comment on this line: Engraved on the heart was Phil and Keely, Past, Present and Future.

That was beautiful.

You totally nailed it! That was the most perfect description of Keely being in love with Phil EVER! Go you.

awesome story i really liked it

AWESOME story! I love it! You like, rock. xD

That was awesome! I loved it! Just fabulous.