| Reviews for Rebirth |
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   Lucyole chapter 6 . 8/3/2013 please write more chapters your story is very good and interesting i like it so far as paring i woudl watn krillen and serena and not vegeta is jsut so boring because there are so many and that woudl be something new ithink. please write more i woudl be very happy about it. *cookies for you* |
| suzu enma chapter 1 . 2/29/2008 I love the story, please update soon |
| Mrs.MariaSmith chapter 6 . 5/27/2006 hey i love ur story i can't wait to read the next chapter so write more asap iight ~mia~ |
| Moose22244128 chapter 6 . 12/27/2005 keep up the good work. |
| Phedre no Delaunay chapter 6 . 10/10/2005 Pretty good so far. One suggestion maybe for improvement would be to add more descriptions. You get started sometimes, but then you tail off into a lot of dialogue. Go into more depth about what's happening, what people are doing and thinking. Anyway, I'd just like to let you know that a fanfiction newsletter will be coming out some time in the near future. Because all authors might be mentioned in said newsletter, I'm letting you know. If you want to subscribe, send an e-mail to phedre44 yahoo . com Thanks! ~Phèdre nó Delaunay |
| I NEED MONEY chapter 1 . 8/19/2005 Yeah, welcome to the dbz/sm section. don't about flames, your story's good. if u were here a couple years earlier, flames were random and rampant. i was there. not that i actually randomly flame people. -' |
| FeralDemonArtemis3.0 chapter 5 . 7/25/2005 I really like this story i can really imagine everything that is happening please update soon. |
| BunnyAino chapter 6 . 7/25/2005 Great story you have here. I did not notice one error, and it is all great! Poor Serena! She defeated Galaxia, but at the cost of all her friends' lives. Once again, great story! Luv it! -Bunny Aino |
| Flame Ivy Moon chapter 6 . 7/20/2005 cool. and your right WolfChildBlazer is the queen of sm/iy crossovers. You know you gotta like her stories. |
| GoldenStar chapter 5 . 7/19/2005 OOH! This is getting good! Please update soon, I can't wait! GoldenStar |
| jamesstutz chapter 6 . 7/18/2005 I love chapter 6 it was great. Keep up the great. Work. You are a great author. |
| Flame Ivy Moon chapter 5 . 7/16/2005 I love it very nice, and i don't mind a little cussing. |
| fallenangel1213 chapter 5 . 7/8/2005 woohoo! I don't blame ya for cursing 'em out. I'm pretty ticked at the male species right now too. _ Keep up the good work! |
| jamesstutz chapter 5 . 7/8/2005 I love chapter 5 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author. |
| jamesstutz chapter 4 . 7/5/2005 I love chapter 4 it was great. Keep up the great work. You aew a great author. |
