that was adorable. Loved their friendly bonding, and Mokuba's mothering. Also, the "keep Otogi" plan was so cute!

Ha Loved this. Lots of fun to read.
Wish there was more.

I'm so in love with this story.

As you can probably tell by my screenname, I am in love with Duke; and I love that you characterised him so well without making him a melodramatic fool, or too 'I'm so sexy'

Ah, I love Mokuba even more in this story! This is just the way he is! Many people forget he looks after Seto, and that he'd do anything for him.

Otogi's story is sort of sad... Hell, it's really sad. And you managed to write it without sounding like a dramaqueen or anything.

The realism you were aiming for was achieved in my opinion. And it was bitter as well (not really a happy ending, Jou and Honda won't love them back).

I wish you'd further this story. Perhaps Mokuba could fix Seto with Jou, and Otogi would chase Honda. Or Seto and Otogi go together to wallow in pity.

Yet it is good now, you don't need to make any more. I am just greedy for chapters :P

Interesting story. Never really seen any like this one. Plus you have good characterisation. Though Seto being drunk is, to me at least, OOC :P But I have no problem with that heh.

Mokuba was very well done! Wohoo! You didn't write him as a stupid sugarhigh idiot! That IS appreciated.

This was uber wonderful!

Thank you so much!

I really like this story, I hope that you write more on it. I want to read the happy ending! I love the forming of friendship that seto and ryuuji are going through. yay! write more on it!

It has a point...

... It made me happy... well, I think that's a good enough reason. And I have another new love (yes, again... I know it's unhealthy but I can't help it!) Mokuba! I swear, he's the weirdest little brother but he's so cute. (But you were just joking about the dead bodies, right? *laughs nervously*) Well, to conclude, I totally love this story! Very much so... Your characters are so REAL! And I just love how Seto went on about "wanting to keep him" - that was just too funny! Hell, I can go on forever...

But I'll be nice. *cough*for once*cough*

:hits over head w\keyboard: im sorry keyboard :glomps: we liked it strange but cute, mokie is the best, the yugi-taichi thing was true they're all so innocent its cute. we did enjoy & yes ur the king of bittersweet. all bow to dimi ;P ja

Mokuba is such the scary-cute co-dependent pancake-making freak-boy. I just love him!

...the thrill of living... Your brain does fascinate me. Have I told you?

Kaiba and Otogi are so cute! Their little dancing around friendship, Kaiba assuring Otogi he wouldn't be buried 'cause only enemies were! Sorry D, I know this isn't supposed to be fluff... but what can I say?

Also loved: fairy tale metaphor, almost-apology from Seto, and the Yugi-tachi innocence.

Oh, yes, must do my little shpeal, bear with me: good boy for not drinking! Keep up the sober work! Ok, done now...

Can't wait for the next part! Then more MaWC? Please?

be it another 'part' or a 'chapter', it was still masterfully written.

I dare say! I'm not...okay, well maybe I am weird XP For sure I am weird. If The Penguin Saga doesn't make me weird nothing else will!(Ask if you want but are you sure you want to know?)

I like the idea of Kaiba having the childish argument XP he should to it more. The idea of Otogi doing drugs is kind of weird. Oo The rehab and arm-rubbing would make sense though...anyway, thanks for updating so fast (or did I just come late?) Bye!

O_O...-blink-...that was...AWESOME! This is such an incredible story and It's not even complete yet!I like 'Togi as a drunk! He's so...cute! Seto's great drunk too. I love how he says things and doesn't even know if it was himself who said it(You understand that sentence right?) I do that all the time XP No drunk of course

I also agree with the whole Kaiba's name thing. Kaiba seto sounds like somebody took a blender and mixed around his name. Besides, Kaiba sounds more buisnessy. Is that a word? Anywho, this story is amazingly great and I'm honoured to be able to read it. Pretty please update quick!-clicks all the boxes below this message-(FYI Author alert and stuff XP Just in case)

P.S. Love your fave pairings. Almost same as mine! (1-SetoXJou 2-HondaxOtogi 3-BakuraxRyou/YamixYugi)

*squeals* I have a new love - Seto when he's drunk! Seriously, he is just so funny when he's drunk. Ryuuji too. I love this story! I just wish there was more of it!

Always nice to get a new story... hope you were not in need of cheering up, though.

Mokuba is so adorably co-dependent. I bet he knows it is no use to yell as Seto now, it is not like he'll remember, or take it seriously in the morning, even if he does remember. So, might as well clean up, and put them to bed. And yell a little, cause, how can you not. Poor little guy.

Nice job with Seto's drunk pov, too... not first hand experience, I hope.

Mokuba hardly needs to be omnicient, if Seto's tongue wags that much when drinking. But he is one smart cookie...

So, you are going to take your, oh, 2nd fluffiest story and make a dark sequel, huh? Figures. But there will be the humor, of course. Can't wait!