Not the best I have seen, but good. The word Chan is for girls. Kun is the male equivalent.

it. Just can't imagine his expression mwahahahahahah

Plz continue Writing! I can see u neva written in Years but u got a lot of reveiws 4 this story so please! Start writing agen! I really am liking it a lot soOoo pLease!

Hope 2 hear from u sooon!

awesome... i like

lovl. this is grammer

...so that's it? I started reading this kick-ass SasuHina story, and this is where it stops? :( It hasn't been updated in years (for whatever reason unknown to me) I, am sad. [

But besides that...

This fix is really awesome! I love how everyone's pretty much in character! Really great job with that! :) You even added Gaara! I was extra happy to read that! Sasuke had a rival for Hinata's heart.

Even though you didn't finish it, I still wanna tell you that this was awesome! Nicely done!

-CES-

please continue i love the story!

All I can really say is..

Please update..

I really like it -

sasuke/hinata and gaara/hinata

I always liked those two pairings!

Well...inspiration for writing...

Don't really have any.

Just love to write!

Writing is a passion, life.

It allows me to express myself.

Plus a big imagination.

That's were I get mines.

Spotted another typo again, I think.

"Come on, Akamaru. Hyuga-san obviously left you here for a reason." Sasuke shifted so that his toes touched the hard floor. He heard the dog back and jump off of the mattress.

Correction: back bark

Again, I really like this story. Can't wait for more.

Thank you.

I spotted some typos along the way, so just thought you may want to know.

As Hinata led him outside, she realized it would be his fist time outside since...

Correction: fist first

Keep writing! I personally really like just about everything about the story so far.

By the way, I spotted some typos and just thought you would want to know.

"It's a shame you can see little Hinata-chan," TenTen remarked.

Correction: can can't

Once I started reading this I couldn't stop. The story is really awesome and your word choices were rather genius in my opinion. Keep writing!

Hi, I just want to say that i really like your story, i can't wait for a new one to come out.

could you make another story where hinata and sasuke come together and naruto and sasuka come together. please. Nice story.