it sounds so good

please continue

Very artistic.

I absolutely like this chapter! So beautiful! And what a kiss! I hope there will be a continuation. Please, write more Sherlock/Beth!

So sad! But so touching and so well written!

BEAUTIFUL chapter! I REALLY like this chapter! Can you make more chappies like this one? Please? with sugar on top? _~ I would really like to see more of your work! Update!

More please! :D

hm, it didn't like the second half of my email, its eschildkret at yahoo, I'd love to do some beta stuff for you, email me! (if you want the help, if not, that's cool too!)

-Anozira

You are an excelent writer. You have found that perfect equilibrium between action and description that I'm still searching for (because I like description too much and use a lot of it. I have been accused of writing 'boring' stories, which is a horrible accusation!). Anyway, it was beautiful. Please continue soon, I'm anxious to hear the next instalment of your original story. Its a used idea, but not a worn-out one, and I have a feeling you'll make it something special. If you still would like a beta, email me your next chapter and I'll make some suggestions. (eschildkret ) Fortunately, the school year is coming to a close and as soon as I finish exams, pack up, and move out of my dorm I'll have time to do some proof-reading. Email me if you'd like some help, otherwise, update soon!

Aww...la la la. I like love. Even if it does make me depressed around prom time. *beats prom flyer with a stick*

aw...hope there's more!

Interesting flashback. :) It's not an overused setting, either, which is good.

Wow. Continue please? I haven't read SH22 stuff in so long!

Quite a bit of angst. Good spelling and grammar. Interesting little vignette. I liked it.

Great job. Lots of angst, it made me very sad. The only problem is the repetition of thrice-zedded, but it's no big deal. You got Lestrade's emotions down very well. Keep writing more!