That was awesome, excellent, cute and amusing, I loved it and wonderful job

You know, I read Alter Egos years ago, and never read this until now. I'm starting to write again, and I've been going back to my favorite stories to gather inspiration. Finally, I know the full story of this event!

This is a wonderful study of Yukito's self-awareness. Most of all, I enjoy his will to be angry, upset - to be his own person - because I feel as if too many people write him off as sweet. You have - or had, since this was written years ago - an amazing sense of his duality. And your interpretation of Touya, too, is very good.

The elements of this story actually remind me of my own fic I wrote about Yukito's subconcious. I think we may be on similar pages when it comes to Yukito's self discovery. It amazes me that two people can think similarly without even knowing the other exists.

Well done.

The way you did this is fABuLouS. I'm not a huge CCS fan, but every time I read a good fic like this, I feel the need for it. This fic is just so great. Points for the covert red references. Hypermetabolism & Intelligent, enjoyable angst FTW!

Oh my goodness.

I actually read "Alter Egos" first, but it didn't affect the story at all. Poor Yuki! And Touya... he's really caring in this one. Loved it!

And the last line- priceless. I really enjoyed this fic!

so sad D:

but the end was really sweet

Interesting. We don't often get to see Yukito angstying, but it would make sense that he would feel so conflicted about Yue.

That was so sweet! I love Touya and Yukito's relationship, and this onshot reflected it perfectly. Wonderful job :)

That was really creative. :)

I adored the ending.

Great job!

-Dana.

Wow, this was actually very beautiful. It's hard to find good YukiXTouya stuff these days... but this is very stunning. Have you ever watched Loveless? Yuki putting tons of pictures on his walls reminds me of Ritsuka doing the same. Intruging idea that Yue would be the core and Yukito the alter... I also adored Touya cutting both of them. I've done that with friends before too, as strange as that sounds. This was a lovely oneshot, you have talent. I'm excited to see more of your work.

that was a great fic.i love it

i loved the ending

"yuki, i'll stay as long as you need me."

"then you'll never leave,"

oh i loved this ending.

This was an amazing fanfiction, you described the characters very well and I liked the ending very much! Thanks for writing this!

wow, taht's accually a pretty good game

nice story btw.

haha

cute ending

Aw this is such a good story! Very well written and well thought of! Very nice!

I loved-all of it! Is the game for real? (I mean, if its a real game?) Your writing style, most especially - One of the most brilliant Touya/Yuki fic I've ever read. Yay for them~! (and you )

lol nice. kinda sad but it's like every one has a secret feels and you really got into yuki head i liked that alot