Wow... Just wow... I'm most impressed. It flows well, and gives just enough information to create a compelling piece. Good job!

To be posted 30 Apr 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

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Post TSL: The final confrontation between a light side Revan and a dark side Exile does not go as she had planned

This was light sabers and psychoanalysis mixed. The Revan we see is wed to the light side so firmly that nothing fazes him. The catalog of ills the Exile has done flows over him like water, and like water, does no appreciable damage. His last words to her in this all to brief work, are telling.

I am a pagan, but the best description would be of Saul of Tarsus after he was redeemed and became Paul.

Pick of the week.

I've always been curious as to what would happen if these two met. I hope there is more of this to come.

You have an intriging opening. I would like to see what other chapters you would have in store.

Sweet stuff here. I like how you use Revan as the utlimate example of what can go wrong and how far one could fall, and be redeemed. It's a very good usage of symbolism. Good all around.

~ The Lady Revan ~

nice fic! D

"If I can be redeemed, anyone can."

A very well made point. Shall we see if the hypothesis is correct?

Good look at Revan, and his reflections as he waits. Since I've only played KOTOR, I can't comment on the other, but it seems well written. The focus is certainly obvious.

Continue. Please.

I must say, I am impressed! Not many people have a light side Revan and a dark exile (cept me, apparently lol) I like this, plus the fact that someone was able to be an evil bastard or wench, as the case may be. I look forward to seeing what happens.

Very good! You portrayed Revan perfecttly and it was actually thought provoking. I liked how you explained Vrook. The Exile was pretty darn cool as well. Good stuff

A solid start. I'm curious to see where this story leads. I like the fact that your version of Revan faces up to what a despicable bastard he was before the Star Forge quest. The idea of him trying to redeem the fallen Exile is interesting, and I look forward to seeing how this plays out.