awww

Aw, that was so amazingly done. I'm just stubmling onto your stories now and i've got to say i love them. Great job. ]

Just gotta tell you having all your text bolded can be a bit hard on the eyes.

Bravo! I thought this was very beautifully written. Thanks.

well...it was...epic like. back to the story?

Ryan never...as in never ever? And he's how old? Thank God he mett Cal.

I have been looking for a worthwhile Calleigh/Ryan fic and this is fitting the bill rather nicely. Your descriptions are spot on and you really seem to have a grasp of the characters which makes it easier to read.

I look forward to more...which I'll go read now. :)

OMG! ryan a ... that? whoa-wee!

i love it!

I LOVE IT!

Roger, what a great story! I'm sorry, but I have to admit, the end had me squealing. *covers red face* Very well done. I look forward to read more stories from you!

very cute chapters. I like this story a lot. Its fluffy, but not to overdone in that area. keep up the good work!

very nice. I liked this one a lot. Glad you portrayed H as a father figure to Calleigh...I hate thinking of him as anything romantic to her!

EquestrianBabe-the reason why the story is in its current format is because i wanted to write it in a "novel form". i know it would be easier to read it in "script form", but i didn't want to change the format in the middle of the story. i just want to explain to you (or anyone else) why i didn't change format. i promise that if i write a sequel, i will use the "script form".

Very good few chapters. But again, it would really really be nice to change the format a bit. Because it is very difficult to read as it is now. Thats pretty much all that needs some changing. Other than that, very good job!

Puh... I think, I need the coldest shower of my life now.

Very descriptive, very good, very sexy - I can't wait until you update the next chapter!