This is interesting. I've always pictured the Montparnasse/Eponine relationship to be dubcon-bordering-on-noncon; I've never considered the possibility that Montparnasse might be jealous of Marius. This flows very well, wonderful job.

That's awesome! I can't decide how to feel about Monty in this...

Beautiful. I really loved the way you wrote from their different perspectives and also how you set the piece up. Possibly my favorite Montparnasse/Eponine ffs.

Brilliant stuff. I would say it's medically impossible, but who cares about such things?

I love your characterisation- Eponine's bitterness, her joy, her thoughts- and I like 'Parnasse, too. Well done!

Just one nitpick: "They both couldn’t be happy." The line itself is all right, it just doesn't flow. Perhaps if you reworded it, it might flower better- but it's just one sentence. I love your story so very, very much!

That was amazing.

I loved the short little pieces, fragments, that fit together to make a story. Her story. His story. History.

I wish you knew the feeling I experienced when I read this.

AMAZING! I LOVE IT! AH! great work. so wonderful.

Beautiful.

Wow. I really liked this. Montparnasse was in character, and yet, it all fit nicely.

(I don't really like endings where dead characters keep on living, but) I liked Montparnasse's reaction to her death.

I realize I'm a little late in reviewing, but I loved it. I thought it was extremely well-written.

Just wanted to let you know that this fic has been stuck in my head since I read it. Bravo.

Oh, that was beautiful! I loved your format, too, really makes the fic. Last line nailed it.

I read it again, and it made me cry again. Just to let you know. And that's pretty weird, because I don't cry at everything.

Oh! This was lovely. "Fine and dandy" seemed odd, but it worked. :) *adds to favorites* Really, wonderful.

Omguh. Eekish and Right and disturbing and sad and inelegant and with the Tome-Wonderfully written, and very true.

What a wonderful note of pathos to send me off to study for my Chemistry test! Alas, though- for I shall be thinking of this fic and the lovely parallel structure when I'm to focus on diffusion and the properties of gases. *sigh* Fantastic stuff, and happy anniversary! *throws confetti*