You're story was interesting and its a shame there isn't more to this, however you're replacements for speech marks were annoying and rather necessary.

OMG the fluff! The goodness and sweetness that is this story...WONDERFUL! I love it!

aw!

so sweet!

xox

this is one of the best un masking scenes i have read. its so sweet. the way it should have been gr. i love fluff especially kay and leroux fluff hehe.

Fluff a la Fluff... there can never be too much fluff... especially phluff.

- Adi

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aww tHAT WAS SWEET YOU SHOULD WRITE A SEQUEL

aWW tHAT WAS SWEET, u SHOULD WRIT A SEQUEL

Beautiful

...*tear* omg...

Oh, what a wonderful story. So lovely, the novel by Leroux should be like that. Really wonderful.

Aww. Beautifully done. That's the way it should have gone.

omg that was so good! so beautiful! i love it!

Absolutely. And utterly. Gorgeous. I haven't sniffled for a fic in the ~longest~ time, I tell you, which is what this little piece made me do. Erik is perfect in his rage and insecurity, and Christine, well, this is the Christine we all wish existed, huh? XD It's a picture of how it could've worked, and it fits perfectly.

its good...i like the way you made her more mature...everyone always makes her seem so dumb and childish.

This is the best alternate unmasking scene I have ever read in the universe of Kay-phiction. I love how you characterized both Erik and Christine: she is so innocent and so unwilling to hurt him, yet so determined and brave! An admirable Christine is rarely to be found-bravo! I enjoyed how you worded Erik's hiding himself in the shadows, essentially BECOMING a shadow, too. Very nice.

I wish I could say more about this phic, but it would only consist of compliments such as terrific, stunning, well-written, and others-I would much enjoy to rave about it forever, but I won't, in consideration of your time and patience. This is such a phenomenal phic! I hope that we will be seeing more of your writing in the near future. _

Regards,

Kates