Part of one's impeccable Slytherin appearance is the use of proper punctuation when writing to the masses, which you have not. An apostrophe is not used to make something plural; you should have written "Slytherins," not "Slytherin's."

Just a helpful tip from one snake to another.

This is really really... Brilliant. Lovely. composed, bitter and beautiful.
A legacy I would be proud of as a Slytherin.
It's also very well written

Most excellent! As a fellow snake, I must say that I enjoyed this. I'd say that you definately captured the spirit of the snakes. One final thing that should be mentioned: Slytherin are full of surprises!

Check, check, check. T:( I love being a Slytherin. This was a totally awesome fic.

Oh, it's wondeful. Very realistic. I love it.

I felt that overall it was a bit too, narrow/stereotypical but was good nonetheless and well written.

Perfect. This is exactly what every Slytherin needs to know. Beautifully written, and I love the last line. You captured the Slytherin spirit perfectly.

Well done.

*Smirk*

[This made my day. Well done. :D]

oooh!

Loveit!

You totally captured Slytherins! This is an awesome piece :) I love the writing style _

5/5

AWESOMENESS :D

That's the spirit. That's just it.

(applauds)

Brilliant. Just brilliant :) the last sentence is amazing... but all the rest is as well, so...

This is hilarious. I know I'm shaming my house right now by showing emotion (especially laughter; what a happy feeling!), but there you go P

I kowtow to you.

Oh I loved it! You could just hear the contempt dripping off that last sentence, I think that was my favourite part of the whole thing. The whole fiction just screamed Slytherin, and the whole thing was skillfully written. All in all a very good read.

Wow, this is amazing. I love it. Heh, i could imagine Draco or Snape telling first years this. Maybe even Lucius. You captured Slytherin amzingly. Well done my friend!

Okay, this is just BRILLIANT. So /Slytherin/ and just... god, you've got them absolutely nailed! I think you might quite possibly be a genius, so congrats. I adored this piece!