That disclaimer sent me into a giggle fit. :D

I love his sense of humour! XD It's too hilarious!

I liked how you described the difference between living and 'living,' and REALLY liked the bit about the sun and shadows. .

Oh look, a scrap of dignity and pride. How’d those get here? - Best line ever. XD

I must reiterate how much I love his bitter humor. XD

XD That was the best!

Ahahaha! Dude, that so made me laugh loud enought to wake my mom! omgwtfroflmao!

You did a nice job with this one... definitely brought that first scene to life even more.

Awesome! Off to read Epilogue.

Laters,

KD

OMG that was great! Good job, I loved every bit of it! Nice prologue...more more I want more! hehe I love this movie and your writing style! KEPP IT UP! _;;

Happy birthday to me?

Now that was just... funny. :D

Hehe. I heart HYDE. The movie was awesome. And this fanifc is so in character, it scares me.

It's so funny. I love the ironic twist at the end:

"Happy Birthday to me."

and Kei's possessive

"My kid runs away, screaming for a ‘Toshi’, whatever that is."

A toshi?

Nice, very nice. I really like it. You give really good details.

oew~! prologue rules~! **hugs Hyd-o-sama** heheheh he's so kewl~! you made it a very fine written prologue . I like it ... a lot XD

Wow, this was certainly an interesting read! Once again, I love how you write from Kei's POV.

This was great! I love the sarcasm you had laced throughout the whole thing. It's a really interesting idea you chose to write about, that part of the movie, from Kei's pov.

I enjoyed this! I really like how you write!

~ Myca

there are entirely too few Moonchild fics out there, so thanks LOTS for posting _ Kei and Sho are just the best haha. and yes, Sho MUST be mildly insane *nods wisely*

more?

I love it, love it, love it.

You were kicking and screaming when I made you watch Moon Child..? I don't recall that part of the day... *Laughs* It was just because you didn't want to see Gackt. xP Hmm, yet again something that I led you into...

Another outstanding work of literature by you. Do it more often. It makes people happy.

'Tasting it, I realized it was just water, albeit with enough unknown contaminants to qualify it as a new type of soda, but water nonetheless.' - Yes, that was probably one of my favourite parts...given the fact that I was drinking water right when I read it.

Keep up the insanely awesome work, Kei-kun.