Please continue this! It's great!

Loved this.

I like it so far, but you really need to update. And oh, you'd better keep Nancy and Ned together.

Hey! I thought I'd reviewed this, but apparently not! Just wondering if you were planning on finishing this. I really love it and I think the relationships are very believeable. I like all the characters the way you wrote them in this story, and I'd really love to see more of it... Well, I hope I'm not hoping against hope here (lol), but please update soon!

i like it so far but i'm biased (i want nancy to stay with ned!) so, it does seem like a good compromise that she'd just consult, but she's nancy, and i keep thinking she'll get involved. ) more, please!

Pretty good so far! Update soon!

oh! Ive always loved nancy drew and hardy boys mysteries and this is turning out to be a great one! I cant wait to see what happens next!

I'm glad you write so realistically. Honestly, some of the other stories have Ned and Frank trying to murder each other, and Ned and Callie having wild flings, but I like that yours is better than that. Ultimately, I'm rooting for Nancy/Frank, but I'm glad Ned is still in character: nice guy, just not for Nancy.

Update soon please...Neds definatly right on the edge of a knife right now.

I really really love this story and I can't wait for the next part. PLease, I am BEGGING you, update soon.

I LOVE your story so far! I can't really think of any criticism so just keep up the GREAT work and POST MORE CHAPTERS!

Julz

Hey! This story is really great I am enjoying it, and all the emotions your putting into the characters, it sreally good I cant wait for your update!

Ned just needs to let go He lost Nancy a long time ago

*~Petals~*

this story is add more chapters.

You're off to a very promising start!

The 'love triangle' between Nancy, Ned and Frank is being addressed in a believable manner, and I am pleased that neither male is acting over-the-top angry, jealous, or unreasonable.

I am waiting to see how the mystery aspect of the story turns out, since I hope this story isn't going to be just about relationship woes.

[If I was to be absolutely nitpicky about this story, it would be your over-use of the comma. In some places you've used it, it just isn't necessary and interferes with the flow of dialogue. For example:

“Well, we’d actually been taking a little bit of a break, and, by break and little bit, I mean maybe a week." (Joe in Chapter 2)

Revised to read -

"Well, we'd actually been taking a bit of a break. By 'break' and 'a little bit', I mean maybe a week."

- might be more comfortable. But that's just me being nitpicky!

Looking forward to the next update! Don't make us wait too long.