I've just recently started reading the Cold Case fan fic. I particularly enjoyed this story and thought you did a great job of writing a "case" story.

Good job with keeping the characters true to themselves as well.

Hope to read more from you soon!

That was great! really liked the story line and characterisation!

Brilliant. It was the first fanfic I read in this format but I have to admit it was the perfect way. All charas were brought to live very identical to the show and I could see and even hear them!

I would like to read more of this kind of works. And one plea: Could there be any possibility of Lil and Scott maybe? Deep inside your heart? Oh please, she deserves someone like him...

I liked this story a lot. Please, do another casefile fic!

Another Tatiana, success! Excellent work, Tati!

Your dialogue is A-Sharp, so well I can hear the characters in my head and good job writing it like a script turning it into a typical Cold Case episode! Lily and Scott's problems are very well done and you have them characterized as well as Chris! and the case is suspenseful and thought provoking (I did not see the end) You portray Karen and all of the suspects as well-rounded and three dimensional without being caricatures! Wonderful, Tati you deserve a medal! :D

I did enjoy it. It was a very good story.

awesome! loved reading this

If someone told me last chapter, you could have wrapped everything up, and convincingly too, I wouldn't have believed it. Lo and behold, you did just that. I am very impressed, and I thank you for writing this story.

I wish to all that is sacred and Cold Case that the writers had chosen to do things your way this last episode. This was just so much better, Lilly's reaction, the Chris/Scotty thing. Yes, you did leave it all open, so thank you for that. I hope you write more stories, because they're just so good.

The ending did please me, and you should be proud you came up with such a good conclusion for the personal turmoil. I thought it was good that Lilly pointed out that she was just his partner, not his mother, wife or girlfriend. She's right, and you kept that in mind. The Chris/Scotty scene rang very true. You know, for someone who hates Chris so much, you paint her with an objective brush, just bringing across her character the way it is, no bashing in the actual story. That takes dicipline as a writer to not let your personal feelings get in the way.

As for the case, I wasn't surprised when it turned out to be who it was, but I honestly hadn't guessed yet. Good choice for the killer. It's usually the person that you don't think it will be, or at least, isn't the most obvious. You managed to stick to that, in my opinion at least, but had a few great tricks of your own.

Now, I have only one suggestion left. Write more, you've got me addicted to your stuff!

Lilly's reaction ringing true all the way, on the edge of my seat for tomorrow's little breakfast. I somehow doubt it's gonna be "I love you, please marry me." If it is, I think I'll vomit. (Well, I hope not, but you get my point.) And the case continues to holds its own, keeping my interest. I don't have a clue, but that's half the fun.

Suggestions? Okay, just this. Make Christina go away, and may the rift between Lilly and Scotty be healed. But that's the more like a wish list isn't it?

This may sound wierd...but I hope Lilly forgives him, that's my suggestion, if you're still taking them. Even though I'm an obsessive L/S shipper, I don't think it's possible at this point...but maybe in your next one...? Anyway, I just love your stories, you're one of the best writers on here. I know everyone's been complimenting how you're handling the script style, but I'm just amazed you can pack in so much meaning with just talking. Anyway, I'm addicted, so hope you update soon. I just wish I'd read it sooner.

Don't worry. It's not obvious to me who the killer is, I'm just enjoying myself, waiting patiently. Everyone's character is right on throughout everything, Vera especially. I have to wonder if Scotty's gonna dump Chris, since you hate her guts, but if it's one thing I've learned when it comes to Cold Case, don't anticipate. Even though I probably don't have to say this, this rocks.

I like how you write, briskily flowing along, the chapter over so fast you can just blink, and mull over what you've just read. I'm actually enjoying the script style, it seems that you and it suit each other. I also enjoy the amount of personal stuff, it doesn't dominate over the case, rather it accentuates. I would make a suggestion, but I'm thinking you don't need any advice from me. You already got plenty of it, and you're doing just grand on your own.

Oh, boy. The cat is out of the bag, isn't it? Thanks for not dragging it out forever. I liked the way you handled it, clean and simple, to the point, but with plenty of drama running just undeneath the surface. Very wise place to end it, your audience is gonna be very anxious to know what happens next.

Thanks for just taking my suggestions into consideration, and I understand why you can't use them. Hey, you're doing great doing with what you're doing. The case just get's better and better. Hope to see and update soon, but you've never been unfair with them, not even close.