Hey, I've been enjoying this story and the previous chapters all day, but the Max-Logan Pool Team-up was particularly awesome. I love this: "Logan swore the temperature in the room ratcheted up ten degrees before she stood again. He also swore that more coins had fallen than Max handed to Kit."

I'm also enjoying Dawn and Joyce in this story; two characters I sometimes found harder to appreciate on the show.

Ok, I know I've told you how much I love this story, but I'll tell you again in hopes that you will continue and finish it! I love the blend of characters and the way you have set everything up. It totally rocks. You have also kept Max and Logan true to character which can be very hard to do in a piece like this. I hope you get around to finishing this!

I've been enjoying this.

i think it is cool how you managed to bring max and logan back to buffy's time and yet still be true to their charciters.

I would think that max would also miss Original cindy, and sketchy and herbal and even possibly normal!

Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter..

very interesting. so glad to see that their is more to the story!

I thought that giles being shocked by the footprint on max's abdomin was really funny!

a truly amazing story. I feel that this is no longer a fanfic, but instead an original novel that I would love to see continued. It would give me no greater joy than to see this story finished.

This fic is great, and I'll definitely be checking out chapter 9!

Hi there... of course I'll wait for the next chapter but please don't let us wait for two years... hehe... however very good work you've done, I really liked how you took two different series and put them together. I've already read this (the first 7 chapters) three times! Keep up the gread work, bye

With the length of time it's taken me to get to reviewing this, I'm gonna keep it short and sweet. A very well written chapter...and some very amusing snippets at the end. For someone not used to family life, Max is gonna be in for one helluva culture shock, lol. More soon please.

i just wanted to say that u have done an awesome job conveying the personalities of everyone, and this is one of the first BTVS and DA x-overs that have ever caught my attention.

I love your story, esp how you give attention to so many characters

and manage to keep them in character. Dawn in particular is often

neglected.

Please consider posting at , which is a Buffy crossover

site. They have some BtVS/DA crossover fics, but nothing near as good as yours.

Excellent chapter!

I don't have anything insightful to say, so I'll just quote highlights for this review.

"They both stayed where they were for a long time and watched the sun slowly rise over the quiet neighborhood...He turned to look at her. She was already gone."

"Hope it’ll be better than the old one."

"I don’t have your ugly sweater! I wouldn’t even want it. It probably smells like demon guts!"

Whenever you can work on PL again, I'll be happy to read it. :)

I don't know what the Slayer Prophesies are all about, but I am glad to have a little more info on what Giles' friend in Madagascar figured out.

"I’ve never seen her drunk before. I’ve never been sure she could even get drunk, actually."

Heh, I've wondered that too. Reminds me of a panel in a Wolverine comic I saw a few years ago...

A hyena gargling - lol.

"Damn it, Max! What do you want from me!"

This was my answer to his question before I read Max's answer: 'A big red target on your face for the big smack you deserve for that comment...bozo. Ever heard of an apology?'

"This is my life. Mine! And you had no right to keep that from me."

By this logic she should be angry at Giles, too, for not telling her at the same time he told Logan. Then again, maybe Giles doesn't have a history of hiding the truth...

"All this time, he had been telling himself that he would tell her...He had lied to himself. He knew that if he had told her, that last glimmer of hope in her eyes would have flickered and died."

I like this.

Ooh-do we get to see Logan and Giles' reaction when they see the report taped to the walls?

*turns to next chapter*