It's good but a bit graphic

Alright,I'm gonna be one of those horrible reviewers and give you some constructive criticism. Your story is good,but your writing is clumsy and un-beta'd,i guessed. You need to have descriptive but connected sentences,and more variety in your words and lengths. Most of your sentences are very long,which gives readers the feel that you are trying to cram information into as little space as possible. SO,awesome story. Nice job,and keep it up!

Very very good I love this story you had a few space mistakes but this is really good

Well written I really like the teasing

Love the Leggie torture!

Wow that was a nale biter big time but so worth it off to read more of your books Namarie

It appears that all legolas and estel does is go through agonizing torture and pain. Through all your stories, that is all they've continually endured.

This is the best LOTR story I have ever read, and I wouldn't say that about just any story since Legolas is my favorite character. You did an amazing job keeping all people in character and added just the right amount of humor to the angst. Great job! I will read all your other stories as well!

Yay!

Wow, I must say, super deep and the pain sounds brilliantly realistic.

Not sure if you will still get this review because the story was posted so long ago, but I just wanted to say thank you for writing such an amazing story. I think that this is the best fan fiction I have ever read! This might be bad news for my GCSE results as I had exams all this week, and revision turned into reading this fanfic behind a revision guide on my iPod. Oops! I think I need to read the entire thing again now.

The Angel of Death who experiments on prisoners in camps... that sounds strangely familiar. Mengele or what?

Either way, I normally hate torture fics, but this is good. Thanks for posting it!

This story is sick and twisted! I love it! I can't stop reading, i feel so sorry for "the elf" and "the ranger" but it is so awesome. Favorited the story, it is so awesome and i cant Wait Finding out how it shall end :3 (sorry for bad English, not My first language)

Better to suffer together, than believing the other is dead...Right. Another beautiful chapter. I hope the twins will save them!

Poor Aragorn. And Sirith. I like this character. I hope Legolas is going to get his hearing back!