I like how you had the ghost monk's writing

nice please send me a link when the second act is out I would really like to read it, also with your experimental journal writing, it's good for the most part. you manage to show there's a difference between the people writing in it, but I think it wouldn't hurt to exacurate. fx Amanda is a lady and very focused on writing correctly, but as time goes by she becomes more shaky and less elequent. so use long words and somewhat formal tone, and become more and more casuel. same with the irate monk, more formal and old words. Kohaku is a Japanese character and while he may speak English, the hardest thing to learn would be the written language I could more easily see him writing somewhat more simply...

these are just suggestions to make the journal more personal, so please don't hate or flame me(puppy eyes)

Oooh, now this looks interesting! But why the dub hate? I like the 'tickle feeling'. ಠ_ಠ

Oh no! Why isn't there any more of this? I was really really enjoying it and looking forward to more! :(

this was a great story, i really liked the journal format. it let us know the history of the kuwabara family in a realistic format other than flashbacks. of course i did wait until morning to read the story since i didnt want to read it late at night. i'm now going to read the next installment and hope that it will prove just as good, i hope you do not leave out diary 2 which should tell of kazuma's childhood.

I'm glad you finished this story. Honestly when I started reading on AdultFF, I didn't care for it, however; I read the Wandering Souls fic. I loved your writing style and decided to give the story another shot. I'm glad I read the story and I am looking forward to the arcs. I love that you connected Kuwabara and Genkai as family, and you brought some of the western part of the Kuwabara family in. One thing that attracts me to your writing is the some phrases you picked up in the show. Many writers only pick up small things hinting at Kuwabara's power being greated, you find almost all and even history hints. Also I give you round of applause for not focusing any of the story of the relantionships between couples, and this goes for Wandering Souls too. You focus on the main character and his development or reveal. Main thanks for sharing this with us and good luck continuing to write.

By the way, you have gotten the longest review I have ever given.

So, you really are still alive. I remember when I first started reading your story a few years ago. It was more scary then any horror movie I had ever seen, and it still is. The way you write adds to the atomosphere and tone of your story. It's very dark and dangerous and mysterious. Your prologue was a great hook. It really pulled me in and made me want to read more and more. The way you ended it with everyone looking over at Kazuma's house and seeing it in ruin was what really got me.

Plus, my interest in the supernatural helped a lot. Your ideas are very inventive. The part with the blood cloud of all those mosquitos was genius. And since I've just re-read this now, I've just noticed that you changed Amanda's death. Now I'm going to be off in my own little world thinking about what that has to do with the plot.

I'm thrilled that you have gotten your inspiration back and are going to continue writing this story. It's the best one I've ever come accross and I would hate to see it die off. I love you writing style so no matter what direction this story takes, I'm pretty sure that I'll still love it. I believe that I've also left you some reviews on adultfanfiction, since that was where I first In the Dark of the Night. So, now that I know you are still alive and well, I'll be keeping on the lookout for an update with the new arc for this story. Take care until then.

Omg dis chap is scary i was reading it at 1:00 in da morn and had ta turn on da lights lol i so embarassed i 15 years old and use to be scared of scooby doo lol and my fam bring dat up like everyday. So this is a little advance for me but since dis is a gud story i gonna keep going... I feel a little safer now dat my cat just came in da room lol keep up da gud work.

"Kuwabara Kazuma is the grandson of Genkai."

Dat is deep i was freakn out i had to read it like 4 times ta get it. Dis is a great story keep it up.

Vegetasmoon

How the heck am I suppose to send an email to you when you are not accepting email from me?

I tried to email you saying that my other accounts are gone. Only the email listed on works I still don't get some stuff, like all my ff.n alerts so not reach me.

I have now reread this story and I can't wait for the next installment. I'm so glad you found the time and came back. C:

i sent u am email please email me back people r askin about u

Chilling. Very well done, I got goosebumps at several points. Hurry and write, I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Oh and just so you know, chapter 15 is only a copy of the chapter before it, so you may want to fix that.

Hey, loved the reposts, it gave me something good to read and boosted my efforts on putting more effort into Poltergeist Report 2. Just wanted to poing out, however, that it looks like you reposted the same chapter twice. Chapter 14 and the Epilogue chapter are the same chapters. Didn't know if you did that on purpose or not, but just thought I should point that out. By the way, I'm taking opinions for any training methods that Genkai might use to train someone's reikan, if you have any, please feel free to pm me with them. Later!

I believe I speak for many, many people when I say 'Yaay!' I was a late-comer to the story, and while I was happy to have it nearly finished by the time I got to it, I always wanted to know what else happened (and where the heck Kuwabara is!)