| Reviews for Birthday Kisses |
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   x.NaruHinaKiba.x chapter 1 . 8/30/2011 Super cute! Keep writing |
| blackrose777 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010 Ahh, so cute! Also very well written. |
| Mew-Mew-Brittany-Chan chapter 1 . 8/3/2009 aw |
| Chopstickman chapter 1 . 10/20/2008 That was soo kawaii! |
| Butterfree chapter 1 . 10/21/2007 Well, it was cute... - But I think you should think more about being on-spot on how the characters would act when they're older. Knowing Hinata, even if she was older, I doubt she would drink Sake or start thinking even the slightest lust-ish thought about Naruto. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| PhantasmagoricBlade chapter 1 . 10/15/2007 heh very nice |
| Frank Wolf chapter 1 . 10/9/2007 I lost myself in your words... a very good thing Its hard to find a story that one can lose himself in these days. So far out of the hundreds I've read... I've only encountered a handful and yours is now there. I've never added a story to my favorites, never cared for it and never had the chance but now I know that I should and yours will be the first one. And at the end of the story my smile widened... |
| Quackpotty chapter 1 . 10/5/2007 Nice story. Please tell me though that you don't support NejiHina? Incest is disgusting, and they're pretty much brother and sister. The fluff scene was nice at the end, but it took a long time to get there. Grammar and spelling was excellent, and the story was well written. It did feel a little bit as though the story started and ended a little bit abruptly, so can you do a sequel? I'm setting this on alert just in case, because I did enjoy this. Thanks for the story and NJOY! |
| Silver Warrior chapter 1 . 10/2/2007 *laughs* adorably fluffy. |
| LesPaul12 chapter 1 . 11/28/2006 loved it! ben |
| Omni Heaven chapter 1 . 10/25/2006 this was pretty good...keep it up. Omni Heaven |
| GirlWaterShaman chapter 1 . 9/6/2006 kawaii! :) |
| TaintedSnow chapter 1 . 7/21/2006 one word to say its okay the "okay" was the one word |
| biacebaolck chapter 1 . 5/30/2006 Excellent story. |
| Dreamicide chapter 1 . 4/24/2006 That was one of the first NaruHina fanfictions that I've read, that sounded completly in character _ Like I could imagine Naruto, Hinata, and everyone else saying what they said. Very great story. The only thing I would change was this line - "He leans forward and kisses her". Don't get me wrong - the detail afterwards of the kiss was very good, but the actual action itself could use just a bit more ... detail, is what I guess I'm trying to say. _;; I hope I'm not sounding to critical! ._.;; Anyways, I could only hope to ever write as beautifully as you did in this fanfiction. |
