| Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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   Forest of Deb chapter 13 . 7/25 I'm not crying, you're crying! Lovely |
| nif-ravenpuff chapter 13 . 7/20 My Hopeless Romantic Guild Card was on the brink of revocation, my faith nearly broken in that last chapter. But, so rewarded for reading to the end. Don’t give up, readers! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/18 Lovely story! |
| Nink chapter 13 . 7/15 It's always fun to read stories that were written before the last book was released. I really liked this ghostly themed story, I don't think I've seen many others like it. It is defiantly a refreshing change from all the time traveling tropes. |
| Bele chapter 13 . 6/9 Beautiful romantic brilliant amazing story, sitting here teary eyed so beautiful it is. Your writing style is absolutely awesomely fantastic, I loved every single word! And then, also, so many funny jokes, the Y-chromosomes one just too truethank you very very much for sharing this awesome story with us! |
| BlueWater5 chapter 13 . 6/8 Wonderful story! Nicely crafted and well written. Thank you for writing and sharing it! |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 11 . 6/3 He will die and be a ghost |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 11 . 6/3 How did the dishes crash like that it's a ghost and a poltergeist was going through them and not a human was going through them? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 10 . 6/3 I thought ghost don't get tired ? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 10 . 6/3 The sun makes ghosts fade ? Why? She is around when sun is up so why now fading when sun is up or coming up? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 9 . 6/3 Why has Hermione still retained her smarts even as a ghost surely death and being a ghost would have removed that ? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 9 . 6/3 If he has hepatitis c why is he willingly drinking brandy? Even though he probably went though hell judging the blood on his robes ? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 8 . 6/3 Finding a poison that KILLED his fellow student (Hermione) would bolster Neville self esteem? Wtf ? How would it do that ? SINCE IT KILLED SOMEONE!? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 8 . 6/3 Finding a poison that KILLED his fellow student (Hermione) would bolster Neville self esteem? Wtf ? How would it do that ? SINCE IT KILLED SOMEONE!? |
| HermioneSnape1983 chapter 7 . 6/3 How did he get hepatitis c ? From unprotected sex or too such drinking or something else ? |
