Yes! Oh course! I loved it! ;)

Lovely piece of work :3

Oh that was beautiful. I thought Yami was written so wonderfully in character. I thought the best line thought was: "Forget about hearing a feather drop, you could have knocked me over with one." Even though it sounded so much like a fan girl type thing to say (I would know xD), it really set the mode and gah, I loved it!

so so so SWEET!

:) i liked it, very cute :) but you could have mentioned a bit about why Seto liked Yami. Still it was nice. :) keep up the good work! :)

Aw! *squeal* that's so awesome! *dies* I love reading your stories... It helps that theres a million and a HALF of them (yeah, yeah, two hundred, whatever). But they're amazing!

hee hee hee hee... funny and fluffy! make more

its awsom i love it & its great_

*chuckles* sweet. Though a bit underdeveloped on why Yami was in love with Seto and why Seto so easily accepted Yami. Other than that, sweet

hahaha. yami's right on the part where it would be REALLY weird if you were having relationships with family. it's so... incest. anywayz, i can't help but notice a bit of... grammar mistakes. sorry, but there was only one and i'm realy happy about your work - setoxyamis like these (fluffy, cute and intimate) aren't really common around here... especially with f*cking yaoi-haters that can't keep their fingers from the keyboard and type mean things. besides, let's see THEM write a story as good as yours, eh?

make more pls.

- JBPT from Phils.

Awesome. Absolutely Awesome.

You have captured their characters perfectly and your writing stlye is excellent. Lots more like this please - there aren't enough authors like you out there.

A beautiful piece laced with emotions. I found it very humourous as well, though I'm not sure if it's just me or not.

Hm, all my recent alerts were sent to the Junk Folder. T.T Most were your fics. I'm so devastated. I have no idea when I accidentally listed alerts as junk.

Ah! Loved it! That was wonderful! Eh...I'm going to have to find that song. ;; I keep seeing songfics written to it. Wouldn't be the first time I've fallen in love with a song because of a songfic! _

Great job! I can't believe I've missed so many new stories from you. -.-

-Kat-chan

Wowe that was sosososososos wonderful believe me i completely mean it. great job it was wonderful!

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He said, “That’s certainly the most sincere marriage proposal I’ve ever received, but…”

And yes, in case you’re wondering, I winced, closing my eyes, preparing for the blow.

Which never came.

“…but don’t you think we should date for a while first?”

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Best lines D I totally laughed out loud at that part. Loved the story

-Achiru-