OMG! Seriously, I was just about to pause my other stories and write something about these two having searched all of the internet for a story like this to no result!

Thank you so much for writing this, and so beautifully too. I'm watching MARS again and this story captures exactly how I envision Ling and Da yae (Tatsu and Rei in the manga). LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

OH. MY. GOD. YOU GENIUS! You are a fucking genius, you hear me? That was the best story I've read since Sculpting for Dummies (longer than yours though) THIS WAS SO GOD! I liked it! I need to read more Mars fanfic. Are you going to make more chapters? I don't care if you do or not, because thsi chapter was so good! Thank you for writing so well when most people on this site can't tell the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. D

-YoyYoy

that was amazing! your writing style is awesome! i loved it! _

Finally some Rei/Tatsuya to read! I can't believe this is the only fic with them as a couple on here - I thought the yaoi fangirls would be all over the place xD

This fic was really good. You used such great descriptive and vivid words! Keep up the good work!

This was sweet. I liked it. Never really thought of those two together, but I could really see them doing this. Excellent working keeping them in character, something you don't seem to see too often on ff.n. _

This is an awesome story. You did a great job! _

You are a god and you make me wanna danc elike a crazy lil monkey. Props to you.

this is reaaly good!

please do another one

ah,...i love mars...

but you could improve it if you describe the small things. ive noticed how authors do that and it helps you visualise a room more

like for tatsuya's room*the heavy navy curtains cut out the light creating a dull...i forgot

(truthfully i dont know what im talking about...i just wanted to sou d fancy

but please do another one with kira

but please try to stick to kiras character. its really annoying when they mess up the charcters.

thankyou for keeping the characters real.

That was really good! So many good lines and revelations. I especially loved: "Sometimes Tatsuya wondered how the descent from the roof had ended Sei’s life in the flash of that short flight while Rei’s fall went on forever." Very beautiful. This is going on the favorites list! Please write more-Mars shounen-ai!

That was actually good... since I'm not much of a yaoi fan, but I liked it anyway. Are you going to continue? (I hope that you do)

~Tina

COOLL!:D yaoi yaoi yaoi! I LOVE Yaoi! Tatsuya/rei... heehee. the perfect couple .. good job on this fic! Keep up the good work! i like how you put tatsuya's feeling for rei and for kira together, it's very good!:D though ... "tatsuya decided then taht he desired rei.." well..that was a bit ..sudden. besides that, everything's great!:D