LOL XD

Translation: Roy is a troll (the Internet kind, not the bridge kind).

:D

Youre story is very funny! XD

I lold a lot, because I can imagine that the Colonel would be that way to Edward! Five stars! :D

Hilarious XD

... (bursts out laughing) Oh, that's so rich! "Edwina Eileen Elmira Emmaline Erica Esther Ethel Evaline"... I can't imagine Edo being named any of those, let alone ALL of them... and you've got his reaction down perfectly! I can't wait to see what he does to Mustang... this is so funny!

EVIL ROY! :( LOL! :D

My god... this is so hilarious

I was rolling on the floor laughing. I think you hit ed right on the spot. UPDATE SSON! I can't wait to read more!

This is good. Can't wait till the next one.

Its sad being a beta reader.

You normal readers don't know the horrers we go through. I mean this story was sort of normal when I first got it. Too bad she still shot down half of my ideas.

*sniff*

It could've been better!

cRAziEr!

Funnier!

...

But it was not to be...

WHY, OH WHY MUST I BE IGNORED BY THE SO CALLED SANE PEOPLE!

ESPECIAL BY MY SIS!

Oh well, I still have my stories to upload my mental instablity on the WORLD! MUHAHAHAHAHAH!

...

That is if I ever get to them... ("Have you ranted enough yet?" - Razra)

-"I will rant as long as I want to! Hey, OW, that hurt!"-

...

I'm done.

"With in every story, there is always another one from its mirror image."

O_o

One of the few times I'm forced to emote to convey exactly how I feel about a story. This story is... mostly insane. There are some funny moments, yes, but it's mostly nonsensical; I understand that it's to be like a fairy tale, but most of those are serious in their own setting. This one... Ack...

Despite all of that, it's still a funny story. It's quite a bit like the cheesecake mentioned in the story: sweet, mostly fluff, and over far too quickly. Whether or not it's the Devil's dessert remains to be seen. *chuckles*

oh my...poor ed.