Loved last chapter.

Beautiful story. I enjoyed every chapter.

Wow. :wipes away tear:

That was a magnificent story. Absolutly perfect.

:)

~Rae

I like it. Just enough to hint at who, but vague enough to bring you back for more.

:)

~Rae

HAHAHAHAHH AWESOME!

This work of fan fiction is awesome. Very original, and not too fluffy and cliche. I loved how you left things such as "objects not exploding" as a bit of a mystery and not reducing this fan fiction by giving cliche answers. Good Job!

Brilliant. Bloody brilliant! Loved this story and the lyrics to interpol at the start of each chapter were nice. I really loved this story. On another level my friend.

Thank you for not making it a oneshot! Okay, I think...I think I just found another great writer on this site. I am happy. THe week just got better. I'll review again when I finish this story.

tht waa the goddamned sweetest thing i have ever read in my life. i'm going to cry...i loved it excessively, keep writing please, or i'll cry for a different reason! that was so emotional, so amazing...words cannot describe. all in all, i loved it. well done.

aw, I just love your work! It's all about love and happiness and everything in the world being right!

Wow. that was really beautiful. So inspiring and full of emotion. I could't ever write that well. i enjoyed your story very much.

pringles,

cade

That was so... so... so... WONDERFUL! *sniffle* Fluff and cuteness and perfectness like that makes me go all wet and drippy. I'm sorry it took me so long to review, but I did get to it in the end!

I would love a new story from you! I have a severe fluff addiction and you're the best fluff writer I've seen yet!

I'm silently sobbing. Beauty, talent, description, beauty, beauty, beauty...I cant talk. If we werein person, you qouldnt have a review. This is incredible. Can I have your AIM? I wat to talk to you, understand your writing. Where does it come from? God's given you an /incredible/ gift. This last chapter is most certainly better than the last and the best. I'm linking it in my profile. It's ..

As I said, only beauty begins to pretend to describe it. It's so rare that I'm choked up anymore, especially over fanfiction. Well done, very well done. If you have original work, /please/ show me. This quality of writing you've shown in the few paragraphs should be shown all the time. It's there, bright as the morning sun. Use it.

And one-shots are my passion, also my forte. Those would be mindbendingly /wonderful/!

Ryoko

aww yay! this was very good and it definitely worth my time, thanks!

That was so sweet. That longing and need for some one to be close to you is so human. It was aching, but not in a bad way. Does that make any sense? It was awesome.