Pretty good fic you've got going on here.

Too bad about the inspiration & computer troubles, but I hope you continue soon. I love Dark Revan. Especially when Canderous is by her side.

Nice job so far on the story. I can't wait to hear what happened to Canderous. Why does he need an artificial liver and eye?

I don't like DS stories generally but I only just discovered this story and I really enjoyed it. The way Carth acts to the fact that the woman he's fallen in love with is a dark lord *again* is very well written. He's hanging on with a hope that he can save her and I think that would be the exact path he would choose if Revan fell again. (And of course with the guidance from a -thankfully survived- Jolee:))

You say that English is not your first language and it's not mine either. And I have to say that I envy your knowledge in a foreign language. (For those whose native language is english may see some mistakes but to me it's great!) I wish I was that good in english so I could write a fic too :) Now I'm moving on to your other fics.

So, keep up the good work and I wish you good grades at the college :)

Wahoo!

OMG that was Freakin' Awesome!

Go as Dark as you can!

aw...is Carth jealous? *evil chuckle*

"Your Republic and the Admiral here should’ve already warned you on this matter. Enjoy your gift.”

*loud evil manic laughter*

Please Udpate Soon!

Excellent chapter!

there not enough DS stories...

Carth, Jolee, Bastila, and now Canderous. All we need now are the droids, Juhani, Big Z, and my favorite, MISSION!

... Okay, done with my little rant. Love it. *Hisses at Revan.* EVIL! And am I the only one who gets the impression she was trying to make Carth jealous with Feon?

But whatever. CANDEROUS IS THE BIONIC MAN! _

Okay, if I rant again someone slap me. I like it Fi and I hope you can find the time to write more soon.

Oh, this is so good. I'm usually a LSFCarth all the way type fan, but I'm expanding my horizons quite willingly with this one. Maybe it's 'cause I keep hoping Jolee's right and Carth'll win her back in the end... in the meantime, I'm thoroughly enjoying Revan in all her evilness... very well done! Can't wait for more - thanks for sharing!

Interesting. I'm curious to see what happens next. Do continue.

YAYNESS! JOLEE LIVES! *Dances with joy.*

Now all we need is Mission and I will be one happy camper. Hope you update this real soon Fi.

Just wanted to say that this story is way more well-written than many I've seen from people with English as their first language. Can't wait to read more, great job! :)

O DSF Revan fic, there is ALWAYS room for more of those.

Oh, I like :) Heh, that's gotta be Dustil. Great to see Jolee still alive too, he always was funny :P Looking forward to more :)

I like this...the opening hook is great.

Revan seems realistically evil, can't wait to see more!

Nice start. I hope to see more, being a Carth fan.

I have to say, I've added this story to my favourites. It's looking good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. To take a wild guess on the young boy... Dustil? :P

It's great to see a DS story where the two characters who are "in love" just can't get to each other... Yet.

Thanks for the good read.