that was good. like it lots. keep writing though. i want to no what happens. :P

Don't be so hard on yourself. You're setting the scene. And an interesting one at that. I like where it's going. Robin's always been a bit obsessive, and Raven is really the only person on the team who can fully appreciate the darkness in his soul. His characterization was strong. You made clear his need to be perfect, and that failure was not an option. Good job. Hope you continue it.

nice! wonder when the drugs come in... the style is nice and descriptive. a few spelling typos and such but whatever. update!

Interesting story so far, I'd like to see where it goes. I hope you continue with it.

Oh my gosh! I want to know what's going to happen! Hmm...I wonder what Robin did with the scapul...sp? lol. I love your writing style. It's very easy to read and it's descriptive. I love it. I like where the fic is headed now. Raven's breakfast is making me hungry lol Please email me each time you update. It would really help me out. Thanks. Keep up the great work!

~Syaoronsangel

lol i think you're actually doing a good job of keeping them in character. interesting start, im eager to hear more!

Fascinating. Does he think Raven's a threat? Does he love her? Like her? What about Star? AHH! So many questions! Please update!

I loved it! I don't think that the characters were OOC. Good job! Please continue to update!

Great story so far! Haunted's my favorite episode. Please update soon! Wonderful!

I did not have to know about the "grebnaks!"

I know. It takes me forever to figure out where I'm going with a story. (Sometimes Ican't go anywhere with one so I just give up on it. Hope it doesn't happen to you!)

very cool story i can't wait for more!

i like your story and you're a good writer..as for the OCC-i dont think its all that bad..well i look forward to seeing where you take this story..update soon, please? thanks and keep up the good work!

i like it. so this is a rob/rae fic? just wondering. update

this is pretty cool, update soon!