This was also good. You definitly have his character down pat. Great job!

this is good

Love it! I think after the other story of yours I read. You have found yourself a pretty much devoted fan. :)

This is a good story. It's simple and sweet. You've really helped to make Obi-Wan's-and the other Jedi's-pains seem more realistic. It's definitely sad to think that these once great keepers of the peace have been diminished to killing whoever comes at them, no questions asked. Great job. :-)

(BTW-I can see Obi-Wan perfectly here. It sounds just like him! "Scratching at his beard, Obi-Wan had a consoling thought; at least he was not green.")

"Just wait, he could hear himself threaten, One day you will look like this too.

But it was Master Yoda’s oft-repeated words that echoed in his thoughts: When 900 years you reach, look as good you will not.

Scratching at his beard, Obi-Wan had a consoling thought; at least he was not green."

I _LOVED_ this part so much! XD I was laughing like crazy over it.

Great view into the life of General Kenobi... I especially liked how you portrayed the feeling of Obi-Wan's (mostly) helplessness in controling the direction of the war, and that little bit about him at least being able to control his appearance...

Very well thought-out, well-written. Good job! :)

This was a well-written vignette! It's nice to get a little glimpse into Obi-Wan's thoughts during the Clone Wars. Keep up the good work!