wonderful story _

Nice story. I'm curious as to what the boys did with the lingerie, lol..

That was so cute. great JOb!

~KOhana

Very cute, as usual. ;)

The Ranma and Akane moments were adorable, of course. And I even enjoyed the scenes with the other fiancess, particularly when they were fighting over the shirt, while Ryoga and Mousse watched. And the anonymous exchanging of the gifts was really cute too-how it began with Nabiki, and then Kasumi took it upon herself to give them to the three most depressed looking ones at the party. It was great to see those three actually get a gift for once: I always do feel sorry for them.

And I don't know why, but I really did love the epilogue. True, it was anticlimactic... but it was so relaxing, and really did a good job of conveying and maintaining that tone. And the way Ranma and Akane were smiling while asleep was a perfect touch. Usually, when they're depicted in that way, it's normally not so peaceful and sweet-at least where Ranma is concerned, lol. So I loved that little glimpse. And of course the koi in the pond at the beginning and end was a nice touch.

Very cute. I really enjoyed it. _

it was realy good but i dont know if you are still gunna write more or not

Another great one-shot! I loved this one too! Another favorites list piece!

Ciao!

A ver ynice wrap-up. Of course, Nabiki could use anything for black amil, the cheeky thing, so I think she would've kept the camera rolling for that reason. Such a nice, delightful story!

Tiney

You''re absolutely welcome for the review. :) It was my pleasure. You have a lot of potential as a writer.

I like this little epilogue because it has such a serene tone to it. You used good descriptors to create the perfect post-Christmas feeling of contentment. And it was also very effective how you began and ended the story with similar scenes (the fish in the koi pond). It kind of brings things full circle.

However, I found that this epilogue as a whole seemed a bit...pointless? Well, not so much pointless as anti-climactic, particularly with the Ranma and Akane thing. Because you kept implying at the beginning that they were off somewhere together, it seemed a bit jarring for the reader to find out, 'oh, they're just sleeping in seperate rooms, they're not even together'. Maybe if they had fallen asleep in each other's arms, it would have been more effective?

But anyway, like I said, you've got a lot going for you as a writer. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next piece! Happy New Year!

I loved the first chap! _ And te epilogue was okay too, but the first chap was better of course. Great story! Continue the great work and hope you have more stories like this! Happy New Year!

~Syv

P.S. Feel free to email me: syvonair

A nice epilogue to a very enjoyable story.

I look forwards to this new story as well.

Good luck, best wishes & a happy new year,

Hououza

Actually, your 'Morning After' is best where it is, as an epilogue. There would have been too much of a mystery for you to explain if it had been a prologue. The reasons for all the young martial artists being asleep all day are more easily explained by the main chapter. You actually did a better job than you thought you had.

Aw, that was so cute. A very well written piece of Christmas-Ranma. Well done, I salute you!

Tiney

What's with the lack of reviews? This is a lovely story. :) The image of the drugged or drunk pile of people made me laugh, but not as much as Ranma pulling the sexy black lingerie out of the bag. I bet he was either thinking that he was meant to wear it in his girl form, or that Akane had got him a really, REALLY nice gift that he himself was never actually going to use, if you know what I mean. :P

Great job, and as for your next piece, I'd say go with something original. And fluffy. :)

I like your fanfic.. It's so romantic but I wish that Ranma confessed first his feelings for Akane before somehow kissing her... _~

Well I thought that was a beautiful story, one I greatly enjoyed reading.

To be honest I can't remember whether I have been reading "If I walked away" or not but I would like to see it continued so I can start.

But, on the other hand an original piece would be good too...

In the end go with what you like and I hlook forwards to having the chance to read it.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

PS. Merry christmas and a happy new year!