| Reviews for Betrayals |
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HoratiosGirl101 chapter 8 . 6/7/2015 please update soon! :( |
whitetiger91 chapter 1 . 4/6/2015 Oh damn, I really feel sorry for Harry right now, I can't believe Dumbledore and the Weasleys all thought he was guilty! Some friends they are. This was written beautifully, where there were very, very few spag errors. One suggestion I would make would be to use commas in the dialogue in place of full stops, eg "He'll be taken care of by tomorrow[,]" [h]e said dejectedly. Hermione would have to be my favourite, where I love how she comforts him and has faith in him through to his release... hehe I wonder though if he really is sane. It will be interesting to see what he does next, and how he reacts to everyone else... I must say I am very intrigued. Well done! |
Philosophize chapter 8 . 2/5/2015 Please don't abandon... |
Osmodious chapter 8 . 9/10/2013 Interesting story...not sure about the whole angel thing, but am guessing the intent was. To provide more back-story at some point...hope you pick this back up someday, there's good potential for something truly different and your writing style is good. Thanks for posting! |
ToddGilliss chapter 8 . 2/18/2013 please continue this story |
MeinGimli chapter 8 . 11/27/2012 interesting story too bad u didnt finish it |
Mashkai30 chapter 8 . 11/2/2012 Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing! |
Olaf74 chapter 5 . 2/15/2012 Please continue your stories. |
Mobozo chapter 8 . 9/15/2011 I really wish this one had not been abandoned. It was just getting good! |
mjac1017 chapter 8 . 2/21/2011 Great story! You should start it up again |
Olaf74 chapter 6 . 12/23/2010 *removes his Jaw from the floor* BLOODY HELL! You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean. Please continue the story very very soon. |
windmelody chapter 8 . 12/12/2010 I love the story so far! You should update it soon :) |
The Fallen Angel 13 chapter 8 . 10/29/2010 when is the next chapter going to be up |
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 8 . 10/5/2010 Awesome Story Please Continue |
Cobra0000 chapter 1 . 4/17/2010 i HATE story's there Harry helps everyone even after they F**K him up the Ass. |