...I am speechless.

This story is amazing, and I can't wait to read the squeal.

I just realized, this isn't an AU fic, but at the same time it is, which is kind of impossible. MY HEAD HURTS.

Yessss!

I loved this storie and hope to one day read the real one. Thank you for reading.

The almost-birth of another Johnny The Homicidal Maniac.

I cackled after reading the Epilogue. Well done; I quite enjoyed the read. I would love to see Invader Dib from you, but if RL and original writing has you by the horns, I understand.

I loved Zim's sense of humor in this one. Though I was a bit disappointed that he and Gaz weren't more involved in the main part of the story. Still, it was also nice and dark in that this Dib's sin wasn't actually solved.

D'aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww. Dib and Zim had a moment.

I found this chapter to be ... a bit unfair to Dib's test. It felt like what he said; that he wasn't allowed to make his own choices until that last point in time. And the POV of hearing the circumstances told to the Doc by Dib is a nice change, but it made the story feel less immediate and less vital.

A praying mantis? Heh heh! And you do seem to like your Fight Club- having Dib and Zim fight till they were exhausted and then talk...

I love that there's so much more for me to read; when I find looooooong well written fics... well I find myself staying up far past my bedtime to read it, the same way you do in order to write it. ;)

Verrrrry interesting, and well written as seems to be your habit.

Oh, man, sorry to hear about having to retype the chapter- that's really horrific. I've undergone similar things, but you soon get into the habit of saving often after that. ;)

Bwa-haha. They really do sound like serious playmates in a way at times. And the phone call from Gaz was very amusing. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this from here.

If you like Nancy Sinatra, how about "Bang Bang (he shot me down)"?

i think

this is

the best thing

i have ever read

in my entire life

Love the story! THe doominator kitten reminds me of the doomkitten from Dragonfable nasty little cat! You should go on that website sometime! And also, Clarence Fishmonger could be from the Fablehaven series. I'm not sure. If it is, I'll PM ya. Love the story. Good luck with this crazy thing we call life!

I don't know what to day, but this one of the best things I've read on this site, I'm so glad I found it, because it was published when I was only 15 which is a while ago now. You're a very talented writer, as I hope to be this good one day, you know how to create a plot, and get under the characters skin. I will definatley read more of your stories on both fanfiction and fictionpress :)