Doughnuts - they're motivation for anyone, even Dementors apparently. Hilarious story. Bravo.

hahahahahahahhahahahaha!

HAHA!

Oh my gosh, this is HILARIOUS! I loved it!

You portrayed the dementors as innocent people so well!

Wonderful!

That was actually really nice done. I found it funny, and it fit in with the actual story nicely. All the innuendos are hilarious. All in all, a very well done story.

Yeah, them being drunk /would/ explain why they were on the pitch. Thanks!

...eh?

well, my friend. That was a VERY interesting take on dementors; I'm still laughing! Cripes. Youa re good. Keep it up!

I'm sorry for nit-picking, but a very reliable website said that Professor Lupin had used a spell similar to Lumos.

Otherwise, it's interesting on how you chose to make a dementor have human-like feelings and characteristics. The way you put it, they're more like humans than hags, werewolves, and vampires.

Donuts on Wensdays? THE FIEND! :) Poor, poor Dizzy...

I'm... Laughing... So... Hard... Oh, the dementors so friggin rock!

DOUGHNUTS! YUMMY! *runs in circles until xavi trips him*

This was so funny!I loved the complimentary doughnut I see dementors in a whole new light!They're just your average depresing, happiness hating people!XD

Toodles!

i liked it no what i didnt like...I LOVED IT thanks for suggesting the story

Too funny for words!

"Though there is a rumor going around that Voldremort has come back to power. Some of us were thinking about joining up. We hear he has complimentary doughnuts on Wednesdays."

*dies laughing*

hi mugglebuddy! love your fanfic! it's great! please update! or please please please continue! i read your story cuz hekatie(my crazy cousin) recomended it. quote hekatie" is's hecka funny! you gotta read it" so i did. and it's really good!keep it up!