Left bra pfffft hahahaha

Wow! This. Was. Great. I loved it! (going on to read the sequel)...

I don't say this very often, but you have a lot of talent as a writer. Your writing style is excellent as well.

Please continue writing! It would be a shame to allow your talent to go to waste...

-turtlegirl42

Wow! This. Was. Great. I loved it! (going on to read the sequel)...

I don't say this very often, but you have a lot of talent as a writer. Your writing style is excellent as well.

Please continue writing! It would be a shame to allow your talent to go to waste...

-turtlegirl42

That was simply awesome! I cant wait to read the other two, and Im going to do that right away!

The last comic store my end of town closed down exactly four months before I jumped on the Ock fanwagon.

Bugger.

Thank goodness for this fic, then. Hurrah! Quality writing, excellent story and lost undergarments! What more could a girl ask for?

Just a quality, quality read. I wouldn't expect anything less of you and Yume.

I will have to say that, initially, I was not a fan of the Ramos Ock. But, after I read this amazing story, I went back and read the "Countdown" arc in SSM. Now, I have a new appreciation for this character. Thank you to both of you, for making me a believer. Wow.

*snickers* I kinda feel bad for Spider-Man through all of this. He tried to be the hero and just ended up being knocked out twice, and having the job of 'bra delivery boy.' I suppose it makes a change from his normal routine! Excellent fic, and now I'm off to read the sequel!

I find myself suddenly grateful for my college anatomy class. Who'd have thought it would be useful when reading fanfiction? This is a great fic so far; I wish I had the time to read it all through right now. Way to go, you two!

Very nice. I like this one.

So I click on this story and read it and I'm like hay this was good did the author Wright any thing else and whoosh I see it’s you and bust up. SMALL WORLD! I never know you had an account here! Good stories. I’m off to reads more. Keep up coming!

A sequal! Woohoo! Get it up here soon! I can't wait! It was a great story. ;)

Well, I dont' recall reading THIS part. Therefore, it was a good time. and I really like it, too. And despite the neglect i've recieved for this, I think it was definitely worth it. ANd I love teh way she's like "Thanks..." *puzzle fits together* "...wait a seeccond!"

he. I luff much. you both know this. _

Is that the end of the story? If so, very good! ;)

You know? When she put her sweater back on I was wondering about where her bra was. But I'd rather have no bra and a shirt than nothing at all.

This is good, and I'm sorry it took me so long to find it. One of the few REALLY good ones out there. Certainly makes my Ock story look like utter shit. Not that that's all that hard to do but still.

I keep trying to think of something better to say than "this is good" but I like it and my mind is a bit fried.

You're the same one over on deviantart I assume, I hope so otherwise me saying that I already stalk you and will favorite this if you bring it over won't make any sense at all. _